BABY THE STAR SHINE BRIGHT

Aug 07, 2010 11:00

baby, the stars shine bright
Jinki/Taemin
romance, seriousness and taemin wanting to grow up, g.

A/N: Don't own SHINee, nor the title of this story (It's a clothing brand, if you must know) Thus, alternatively subtitled: meet you halfway (but no one is counting)

Someday,you’ll write your own stories. And university papers. )

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miss_circle August 7 2010, 15:26:56 UTC
Oh well, I'm the total opposite. I've always wanted to grow up faster. I hate high school, and I personally think I should have skipped it. I'm glad I'm in uni now haha xD

Nice read ^^

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salted_taiyaki August 7 2010, 15:38:18 UTC
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idk what to say because there's so much i loved that i want to point out
the entire conversation itself, the way it went. it was perfect and it was greater imo because it's ontae (/bias) but even if taemin didn't love him like that and didn't yearn for jinki i think it would've been just as great.
and the paragraphs of their dorm was kind of like, idk it just struck me in an odd way and i loved it.
also i'm going to assume it's your style--i really loved how none of the conversation ended with periods and how it just kept flowing from jinki to taemin to taemin's thoughts and back

but yes i liked this a lot because of the melancholy feel, sigh ♥ ty for sharing, memming~

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volatileflame August 7 2010, 16:16:45 UTC
this was beautiful <3

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amanda_elf August 7 2010, 18:21:48 UTC
I like this brand and that made me want to read it. :)
LOL!
Good thing I did, this was beautiful <3[2]

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anapp August 7 2010, 21:15:22 UTC
This was really beautiful. I loved Jinki's lines, how mature, kind and thoughtful he seemed. It struck me as a real Jinki comment and that is really nice. ♥
Taemin's yearning to be older is so realistic. This whole oneshot is.
Thank you for sharing! ♥ The pictures added a nice touch too. :)

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