Fic: Dance with the Devil

[cieluna]

"Patrick Stump wasn’t born with two left feet. Unfortunately, he wasn’t born with the traditional doe-si-doeing, cha-cha-chaing kind either. Patrick was born with a pair of peg legs; one of which was all chewed out by rats and both had the predilection to flounder about in random directions or the personal space of people within a twenty meter

Comments

[washingbasket]

ahh
Too cute!
Im Melting!
First Son Sequel!
CANT WAIT!

[wtfxslutface]

Oh Oh OH!
I loved this.
Kissing Patrick wasn’t any less like talking to him over a warm cup of coffee; each second they spent offered something new to contribute to how incredible he really was as a whole. Pete couldn’t feel any happier even if he wanted to. He was there, right at the top of the span of emotions he could feel, and he had no intention of ever climbing down.
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Patrick's so cute and infuriated at the biginning
and Pete being all vulnerable.
I love this. So freaking much!

AND EXTRA SQUEEEEE
Can't WAIT for the sequel of FIRST SON!
XD

[mikeyface]

This was AMAZING!! Definitely one of my new favorites. The writing is flawless, and the characterization is absolutely PERFECT. :)

In short: I LOVE IT!! :) Thank you for writing such an amazing story!

[cieluna]

Oh how I love you right now. ♥
Every word of your comment made me so happy. :')
*hugs tght*
thank YOU for reading it and liking it~ :D

[mikeyface]

*HUGS BACK* :D Aww I'm really glad I made you happy. Your fic made ME reallyreally happy, so thank YOU for writing it!! :D

I have read it 3 times already. XD

[of_silverandsky]

Awwwwww my brain just melted from the cuteness of this ♥____♥

[cieluna]

HEYYY. :D

Oh boo life. :))
But going shopping sounds good though.
*taps chin*
That reminds me, I haven't bought new pencils. Hmph.

Thank you so much and I ♥ your reviews, no matter it's length! :D

Yes, yes. Gym must die. Along with gym teachers. Except the hot ones who just happen to be nice. :D

And, I concur.
HEEHEE.
*giggles*

Aww, thank you so much again dear. :*
Ooh, swoonmelt is now my new favorite worrrrrd.
;)

[cieluna]

Well, if it's any consolation, I posted the First Son sequel already so... :D

Hahaha, I'm taking all that I can get! xD Thank you so much! :)

Bah. They're just bitter that they couldn't be real gym trainers or whatever.

Okay, I'm now imagining asthmatic horses or something. O__o :))