Comments | cieluna: Capitol Voice (2/7)

cieluna

Capitol Voice (2/7)

Jan 29, 2009 22:48

( Ryan and Spencer would roast him centerstage for not bothering to freshen up or even grabbing a clean shirt but Patrick would prefer a barrage of last-minute touch ups than a clinging Pete gripping his hipbone so hard that his fingers would leave a permanent dent. )

^ fanfiction: capitol voice, * pete/patrick, # fanfiction, * brendon/ryan

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misluvlei January 30 2009, 00:19:58 UTC

great chapter

tempestinatcup January 30 2009, 01:43:50 UTC

*griiiiiiiiiiiiiiins*

wtfxslutface January 30 2009, 21:56:25 UTC

Gahhhhhh
I can just see patrick falling in love with a little copper-locked girl and wanting to keep her. This is too fucking adorable.
Patrick: "Can we keep her Pete? Please Please!!!!!?!?!?"

And then it gets a bit angsty. PETE YOU FOOLHEARTED FOOL! NO MIKEY! JUST PATRICK FOR U!

Damn sexual frustration. haha, poor boys.

Moar soon?

desireem81 February 3 2009, 05:49:23 UTC

Yay I finally read it.

"Patrick's unoffical daughter" OMG THIS KILLED ME!! I love Patrick with children, he seems so fit for it!!

Nice fail porn attempt, the calf thing was perfect. Lol boys, so ungraceful. Poor Patrick though, I feel really bad for the guy. Must be hard.

Okay, I will read chapter 3 tomorrow... hopefully. I am super excited about your BBB btw!

jordanzgrl17 February 4 2009, 00:24:03 UTC

Copper-locks is too cute!

And now I know why chap 3 made no sense to me. Poor Patrick.

Pete needs to grow some balls and tell his papa to stop interupting him.