The Story Of Us - Chapter 1

[cieraryoka]

Title : The Story Of Us
Author : cieraryoka
Pairing : YamaShi
Genre : Friendship, school life, angst
Summary : Shida Mirai, second year in junior high, kept a special feeling for Yamada Ryosuke since their elementary and always trying to improve their relationship and before she could proceed, many things had appeared and the obstacle for getting her

Comments

[beyond_limits13]

ohhh... this fic is so interesting. and it's just the first chapter yet I can already feel the characters emotions, especially Mirai's. Now, I wonder how this will progress especially now that she saw Ryosuke again...or not? lol.

I'll be waiting for the updates ne~ :)

[cieraryoka]

thank you for commenting.. hmm, i think i'd skip too many scene on the original plot..., and the emotion of Mirai is really the important one.

sorry for the late reply because i kind of busy this week, and the next chapter will be updated maybe in this week.
*this weeks really a hectic-crazy life*

[beyond_limits13]

you're welcome~ ♥

yea, mirai's emotion can really be felt that's why I think you really did great in writing and showing her emotions...

oh, don't worry about late replies ne~ I understand...I've had my busy moments too! Hehehe. I'll be really waiting for the update! Ganbatte ne~♥

Hello :)

[ghiekaye_20]

This is interesting :)

I'll wait for your updates :)

Good luck!

Re: Hello :)

[cieraryoka]

Thanks for reading and commenting~!!
i'll try to update soon.
Yosh! Ganbarimasu!~~ ヽ(゜∇゜)ノ