quite suddenly

[ciette]

a case of (pointless) attestation
but too little consequence

Your name is pretentious,
you tell me one day,
the edges of each letter weave superfluously around my tongue,
writing itself out with disconcerting tranquility in my spiteful handwriting,
looking too sensible to pass off as a scribble on my lazy dog-eared lecture notes,
creeping between

Comments

[printedapples]

EXCUSE ME WOMAN YOU ARE NOT RUSTY. AT ALL. NOPE. NOT AL ALL. :____:)/
*dies in shame*

i really like it, btw, though i think i kind of know what you're talking about... D:

[ciette]

A;LKSDFJASKLDF whut you write beautifully bb, don't die!! D": (revives) it took me forever to try to coax these words out into black and white OTL

aldksjfsf thanks so much!! ; A ; ♥ I would love to hear your interpretation of it sometime - I think writing poetry makes you realise many things, but listening to other people's responses to your poetry also opens another door to self-realisation. hehe reminds me of H3art notes.

[printedapples]

I really doubt that, but thank you anyway :D *glubs like a fish*

heheheheheh okay :D

YOUR ICON hehehe

[ciette]

Hehehe no problem! Don't say that, you're just rusty too! Read some of your fanfic again recently (heh). well-written fluffff kekeke

[yoursubtext]

♥!!!!! i love this kind of writing - the welcome heat of nostalgia; how it slowly invades my senses, and leaves me through an exhalation of half-longing, half-contentment.

[ciette]

a;skldjfa THANK YOU BB! This means a lot to me. ♥ ♥ I went to nap feeling quite satisified, but by the time I woke up, I started feeling embarrassed that I had posted my mediocre writing online randomly. orz I'm so glad you liked it!! ^-^

[yoursubtext]

BRAVERY IS PART OF GROWTH. and of course you're never satisfied with you work - you're the creator; as writers and artists, we'll always be self-critical and perpetually seeking improvement :)

let top blow you a flowery kissu~

[yoursubtext]

btw is it okay if i repost your poem on my journal? i can f-lock it if you want. i just think it's so beautiful it needs to be shared :x every closet romantic intelligent schoolgirl can relate to this! hahaha but if you're not comfortable with that notion, that's okay too :)

[printedapples]

UNF BB, FAITO ;_____;)/
----> if you are in as bad a state as me and my beloved economics
------> OTL

[ciette]

FAITO~!!! SOB KOMEKOME ECONS IS KILLING D": D":

[printedapples]

OH SHISUS ALMIGHTY ;___; GIVE ME STRENGTH SHISUS!
IM DYING TOO WHAT CHAPTER ARE YOU AT :X

ILU KYUKYU!~ BOY IS GOING TO BE A SEAWEED AMBASSADOR WUT

[ciette]

GIVE US STRENGTH HOLY SHISUS!! TT v TT
I'M LIKE... STILL AT MICRO ._. firms and they operate part one I'M SO SLOW D: you?

HUH? SEAWEED AMBASSADOR? O__O WHAT IS THIS. ELABORATE

[tsuyokunaru]

okay, I'm shit at both writing and reading poetry, but the title totally grabbed me.

AND FUCK. THIS IS BEAUTIFUL. I think that it gets me so well because I live off unrequited love (yes, I admit I hold to heart that stupid idea that love is only possible when not rewarded and the party is over when it's returned). The word usage is very eye opening, you describe pretty daily life situations in a way that make them seem out of this world.

Also, I almost cried in the end, kept myself in check though.

[ciette]

What is this, you're great at writing! I've read your fics alright ♥

T-T-THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR KIND WORDS! ; A ; I was so taken aback by your comment and I seriously danced a little because I felt the same way while writing this. After some encounters with unrequited love, I can't help feeling very strongly towards it with a touch of cynicism as well. Don't cry hubby! (HUGS) ♥

And that's a very cynical view of love indeed, but I can't help but think it holds a lot of truth in it. >":

[tsuyokunaru]

Haha thanks, but I meant particularly at writing poetry (not that I think my prose writing is amazing, but.)

Oh my, I would like to see you dancing! I bet you look all cute. My friends have assumed that this way of looking at love it's my way to experience it without getting hurt. I don't know if they're right, but it is mostly true than whenever someone likes me back, it seems like I magically stop liking them.

ALSO, DAT GENG. Fuck, he's so beautiful, why did he have to leave ;_;

[ciette]

Ohh, I see. Just curious, have you tried writing poetry before? Somehow I have a feeling that you might adapt well to it! * A *

HEHEHE it'll be quite a brainbreak, my coordination is quite bad XD speaking of dance, K-pop has really got me interested in dance again. I have friends in school who dance Lucifer/RDD like a piece of cake and I'm just like * A * ~*~A W E~*~
That's very strange indeed - Has this happened more than once? Do you feel frustrated by this? D:

I KNOW RIGHT TT v TT GENG JUST COME BACKKKK ;_; gosh SuJu just isn't the same anymore D": plus Teuk and possibly Yesung and Heechul are going into army next year?!? /DYING RN D":