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cinderbella333

Sherlock Fic: Obvious Fact (3/10)

Jan 05, 2011 07:20

Obvious Fact (3/10)

by MuseDePandora (see: Master List of Fanfics)
Disclaimer: BBC's Sherlock belongs to various persons and corporations that are not me or associated with me. This piece of fanfiction is written with the admiration and respect for the original work. I claim no ownership of the show, Sherlock, or its accoutrements. No profit is ( Read more... )

genre: pre-slash, pairing: sherlock/john, fic: obvious fact, fandom: sherlock, fanfic, genre: slash, fanfiction

Comments 10

random_nexus January 5 2011, 17:54:22 UTC

*grinning* I really am enjoying this VERY much. Transparent Sherlock is transparent. *snirk* And I like that John's the only one that he'll allow to boss him around a bit. Hee.

Nicely done, moving onward!

cinderbella333 January 6 2011, 07:59:30 UTC

I'm so happy that you liked this chapter! And I'm glad you like how I've written Sherlock allowing John to boss him around a little bit. Thank you very much!

days_of_storm January 5 2011, 21:31:52 UTC

ahhh, see, I told you so...I would love next ones as well ;)

and I do. I really really like this. The whole episode, especially the last big paragraph. Just lovely :) off to read the next part :)

cinderbella333 January 6 2011, 08:01:49 UTC

I'm thrilled to see you came back and continue to enjoy the story. I'm also very happy that you like the last big paragraph here. There were points where I wondered if it'd feel to the reader like I was just tacking on depth. Thank you!

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cinderbella333 January 6 2011, 08:03:31 UTC

Very right you are. Glad this is continuing to amuse you! Thank you very much for reading and still letting me know what you think. I really appreciate that.

stardust_made January 6 2011, 16:53:28 UTC

I quite like how you've broken down the relationship to demonstrate they are equals- and with such an unassuming prompt like bed-making. Nice observation how the little things say a lot about Sherlock's appreciation of John.

cinderbella333 January 6 2011, 16:57:28 UTC

Oh, thank you very much for coming and reading my little piece. I'm very happy that you like the bit about bed-making and my attempts to illustrate more equality in their power dynamics. I really appreciate your reading and leaving me a comment letting me know what you thought.

tehomet January 10 2011, 00:21:13 UTC

Excellent. I like John's reasoning about the power balance in his and Sherlock's relationship.

cinderbella333 January 10 2011, 04:34:37 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you like the bit about the power balance in their relationship. I wanted there to be evidence of more equality than some outsiders in the show might otherwise think. Thank you for reading and replying!