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cinderbella333

DW Fic: The Trial of River Song (4/9)

Jan 10, 2011 10:37

The Trial of River Song (4/9)

by MuseDePandora (see: Master List of FanficsDisclaimer: Doctor Who belongs to various persons and corporations that are not me or associated with me. This piece of fanfiction is written with the admiration and respect for the original work. I claim no ownership of Doctor Who's creations. No profit is made from this ( Read more... )

fic: the trial of river song, character: river song, fandom: doctor who, character: doctor, character: the master, pairing: river/doctor, fanfiction, character: jack harkness

Comments 16

owlsie January 10 2011, 18:55:52 UTC

(flail. squee)

try this html for the text: http://www.devx.com/tips/Tip/13041

cinderbella333 January 10 2011, 23:42:09 UTC

I'm glad you liked it. And thank you so much for that link! I will definitely look into that.

amy8benson January 10 2011, 19:43:29 UTC

OMG, a new chapter!!!
Thank you, thank you, thank you!
Amazing story.
Can't wait to read this chapter.

cinderbella333 January 10 2011, 23:42:41 UTC

Your enthusiasm thrills me. Thank you! I hope you liked the chapter. :D

amy8benson January 11 2011, 03:42:22 UTC

Oh yes, I loved it.
Looking forward to the next one now. :)

cinderbella333 January 11 2011, 10:34:49 UTC

Wonderful! Thanks again!

rivers_disguise January 10 2011, 19:54:46 UTC

This is hands down the best piece of work yet in your oeuvre! Atleast it's right up there with everything that's so awesome about you as a writer. You've got the RS characterization bang on in this one, especially with the tiny details like the "Ooh!" or "Dont you dare!". I want this to be never ever ever ending so that I ALWAYS look forward to random surprises on my Live Bookmark feed :D

cinderbella333 January 10 2011, 23:45:39 UTC

Thank you very, very much. I'm so happy that you like this story. I am always so insecure that because of the formatting, it's somehow off-putting. To hear otherwise is a great relief and joy. I'm extremely glad that the characterization of River feels correct here for you. Especially the "Oooh" and "Don't you dare" lines. I always like hearing which lines in particular worked for you as a reader. Thank you for reading and continuing to leave me really lovely feedback. It makes my day.

honeynoir January 10 2011, 21:09:53 UTC

Even. More. Engrossed. Now.

This is fantastic.

honeynoir January 10 2011, 21:11:36 UTC

And this comment makes little sense without my reply to part 3 close by, I realise... xD

cinderbella333 January 10 2011, 23:46:40 UTC

Ha. :) I suppose it does help to know your comment to part 3. I'm terribly complimented either way. It's wonderful that you like the story so much. Thank you for letting me know that. It means a lot.

promethia_tenk January 10 2011, 23:19:48 UTC

Bloody . . .

Congrats--really very tense now.

cinderbella333 January 10 2011, 23:48:03 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad that you're able to enjoy this, even though it is a WIP. I'm glad that this is feeling very tense to you now, since that's definitely what I'm aiming for. Thank you again for reading and leaving me a lovely comment.