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cinderbella333

Sherlock Fic: Obvious Fact (9/10)

Jan 11, 2011 13:16

Obvious Fact (9/10)

by MuseDePandora (see: Master List of FanficsDisclaimer: BBC's Sherlock belongs to various persons and corporations that are not me or associated with me. This piece of fanfiction is written with the admiration and respect for the original work. I claim no ownership of the show, Sherlock, or its accouterments. No profit is made ( Read more... )

genre: pre-slash, pairing: john/sherlock, fic: obvious fact, fandom: sherlock, genre: slash, fanfiction

Comments 11

random_nexus January 11 2011, 22:17:45 UTC

OH! That was awesomely managed! I enjoyed every teeniest bit of it!

XD

cinderbella333 January 13 2011, 13:56:43 UTC

I'm so happy you liked this chapter and agree with how their fight turned out! XD Thank you!

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cinderbella333 January 13 2011, 13:57:21 UTC

Thank you! I'm really glad you liked that line! I was worried people would think it was a cop-out.

days_of_storm January 12 2011, 09:40:33 UTC

hahaha "We'll have sex later," Sherlock said. oh Sherlock!

I'm glad that John finally made his mind up. I loved/hated the part of them not speaking. that sounded very painful...but of course Sherlock knew exactly what was going on.

ohh, and only one last part to read? :/

<3

cinderbella333 January 13 2011, 14:00:21 UTC

I'm relieved that you like Sherlock's putting sex off until later. That's how I saw his characterization in this particular situation, but I was concerned whether the reader would agree. I'm glad you do.

I'm so happy you like the resolution of their argument. It was actually really hard for to write the parts of this story where Sherlock and John aren't talking. It was harder than writing them actively fighting. The idea of having these two in the same room and not interacting? Painful.

Thank you for your comment!

days_of_storm January 13 2011, 17:46:48 UTC

yes, completely...it just doesn't seem right for them to just not talk...so yay for John actually breaking the spell :)

thanks again :)

stardust_made January 12 2011, 09:51:49 UTC

Some lovely use of words there, my favourite: "he imagined he could hear something tearing inside himself, like a page he hadn't even known he'd been missing".
Looking forward to the conclusion of this, I am sure you've done it justice!

cinderbella333 January 13 2011, 14:01:20 UTC

Thank you! For what you said about my words, and telling me which line was your favorite, and for your vote of confidence in me before seeing the ending chapter. It means a lot to me.

xjill January 12 2011, 20:55:00 UTC

The description of the kiss was breathless! And Sherlock with "we'll have sex later" - heh. Nice pacing in this chapter.

cinderbella333 January 13 2011, 14:02:32 UTC

I'm thrilled that you liked that kiss! And also very happy that you found Sherlock's, "We'll have sex later," line amusing. And I'm quite relieved that pacing worked for you. Thank you very much!