Title: The Duke and the Photographer
Author:
ciraaranaRating: PG
Word Count: 2,285
Summary: A picture says more than a thousand words. But with so many words, it sometimes takes a while to understand what, exactly, the artist is trying to say.
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. Names, characters etc. are the product of the author's imagination. Any
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Hmm, I think Gwenny was aware at some level that Phil was jealous of her. But why would a photographer be jealous of a lady? Now she knows. ;)
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And I think it is the perfect length! I wouldn't have had it any shorter. :D
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Oh, no, shorter definitely wasn't possible. Longer, yes, though I now think the story would have lost if it had been longer. (Though I can't help but thinking about a sequel-ish something...)
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Just a note-since the rest is so beautifully and accurately written, I suspect this will make you squeak and jump quickly to fix it: "His Grace's eyes suddenly opened wide and his finger's gripped Phil's wrist tightly." One too many apostrophes in that sentence ;) Not enough to bother me, but I thought you might like to know!
Loved this, going to go read the sequel now <3
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And thanks for pointing the overabundance of apostrophes out. I thought I'd edited that, but it seems not. *off to produce proper spelling*
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