Original Fic: The Duke and the Photographer (PG)

Feb 07, 2011 10:32

Title: The Duke and the Photographer
Author: ciraarana
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2,285
Summary: A picture says more than a thousand words. But with so many words, it sometimes takes a while to understand what, exactly, the artist is trying to say.
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. Names, characters etc. are the product of the author's imagination. Any ( Read more... )

original fiction, rating: pg, genre: romance, type: ficlet, slash

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cinnamonselkie February 7 2011, 11:16:15 UTC
Aaaawww....*goes all melty* This is just beautiful. Smart woman, that Gwenny - I wonder if she had already guessed Phil's motivations. Cinnamon.

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ciraarana February 8 2011, 10:21:11 UTC
Thank you very much!

Hmm, I think Gwenny was aware at some level that Phil was jealous of her. But why would a photographer be jealous of a lady? Now she knows. ;)

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oliviaokay February 8 2011, 02:56:03 UTC
Very cute; I love how dreamy Adrian seems, especially in his sleepy state toward the beginning.

And I think it is the perfect length! I wouldn't have had it any shorter. :D

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ciraarana February 8 2011, 10:23:41 UTC
Thank you very much! Dreamy Adrian in his kitchen, half asleep over his coffee cup, was the first image I had for this story, and I love it very much. So pleased you like him that way, too. :)

Oh, no, shorter definitely wasn't possible. Longer, yes, though I now think the story would have lost if it had been longer. (Though I can't help but thinking about a sequel-ish something...)

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ciraarana July 25 2011, 17:40:17 UTC
Hey! Good things come to those who wait: I posted a short sequel, The Duke's Happy Lover. :)

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caityjay July 24 2011, 15:34:25 UTC
This is SUPER adorable, thanks so much for linking it in the Snuggle sequel so I could read it first :D

Just a note-since the rest is so beautifully and accurately written, I suspect this will make you squeak and jump quickly to fix it: "His Grace's eyes suddenly opened wide and his finger's gripped Phil's wrist tightly." One too many apostrophes in that sentence ;) Not enough to bother me, but I thought you might like to know!

Loved this, going to go read the sequel now <3

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ciraarana July 25 2011, 16:36:59 UTC
Thank you very much!

And thanks for pointing the overabundance of apostrophes out. I thought I'd edited that, but it seems not. *off to produce proper spelling*

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