Fic: Watching Him (NC17)

[ciraarana]

Title: Watching Him
Author: CiraArana
Rating: NC17
Word Count: 6,515
Warnings: awkward first time sex between two sixteen-year-old boys
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. Names, characterst etc. are the product of the author's imagination. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, is entirely coincidental. Also, hands off, mine.

Comments

[slashpervert]

Sweet, beautiful and believable. Thank you!

[ciraarana]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed reading. :)

[libby_drew]

I love clumsy first times! This was great. The boys were adorably awkward and just...adorable. ;-p Very enjoyable, thanks for sharing. :D

[ciraarana]

Thank you very much for commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed my boys. ;)

[haldoor]

Oh, that was great! Wonderful story and characterisations. I love their adorable cloumsiness; the awkwardness that turns to mutual desire and the delicious sex. Absolutely lovely! ;-)

[ciraarana]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I had a lot of fun writing Stuart. :)

[saskia399]

This was the very first time I read a believable teenage slash love story! And I've read a few! It was just the right amount of awkward and clumsy in a virgin kind of way. And not too angsty, which was lovely!

And the way it happened and they both figured it out together was completely cute! And hot!

Thank you for writing and sharing! *bounce*

[ciraarana]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I know what you mean about stories about teenagers that aren't believable. The bunny to this one bit me partly in response to reading one story too many about teenage boys that just didn't seem, act, or talk "right". I wanted something that was, well. Believable and cute and perhaps a little nostalgic, too. I'm happy I managed that. :)