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circa1220bce

FIC: a history of things unsaid

May 08, 2012 22:05

*surreptitiously wipes dust off of LJ*

Fandom: Thor/Avengers

Rating: NC-17

Pairing: Thor/Loki (implied Loki/others, Thor/Jane, Loki/Doom if you squint and have a bizarre definition of what a relationship is)

Length: 30,500 words

Summary: The Kings and Princes of Jötunheimr gain immortality and a ruthlessness unmatched by any other by having their hearts ( Read more... )

fandom: thor, thor, loki, fandom: avengers

Comments 1

topaquity February 27 2013, 04:14:38 UTC

... I might totally be overstepping my bounds by commenting on your journal, but I feel better that you've made it relatively accessible; at least I don't feel like I've scoured the depths of the internet to stalk you down and find you.

Erm. Ahem.

Hi. I'm just a fan, and I hope you don't consider this harassment - I apologize beforehand if you do.

Circa. Your writing is truly, truly beautiful. It makes me sad, and heart sick. It sounds corny to say it, but surely you wrote Magic, Lost and Found with the full intention of making your readers feel that way. You're so gifted at building the little pieces of your characters, so much that I think we see those little pieces more than we can see the big picture. Thor and Loki are just enjambments of deceit and heartache and plaintiveness and madness. You also do a wonderful job of telling a story without ever telling the full story. You don't explain things, there's never any exposition (or a sense of closure, though I know the story hasn't ended yet). It's frustrating, but also very ( ... )