NO FUTURE... this is the jakob fair saga

[citizen_crass]

This is an excerpt from the short story I am working on titled, "17 Seconds" Let me know what you think of it.

A gunshot echoed through the hallways of the seedy downtown Los Angelas motel. Drifting and clinging to the air for what seemed to be and eternity. With one bullet and one shot all of the pain and agony would be gone. The 9mm slug ripped

Comments

[ravenjane]

i guess i just wonder why you choose to dwell on that time in your life...but anyhow. Very good writing.you paint a perfect picture. I just don't know what the character looks like...know what i mean.

trapped in junk-time

[citizen_crass]

Well, thank you. The reason I "dwell" on that period is because of two reasons. First, it was a period in my life that lasted a very, very long time. Six fucking years! Reason two, mainly because there is so much that happened to me in that time that completely lends itself to writing, ya know what I mean? I mean, I haven't really lived anything else yet, so I don't have to many recent experiences to write about. Wanna help me gain some meaningful life experience? *wink, wink* When you say the way he looks, do you mean like physical features? Anywho, that isn't all the zine is about, just one aspect. I am about to post some other writing about society and politics, so let me know what ya think honey! Love you Jasmine!