Wow! Jimmy and Castiel both have issues but I think Jummy's are far worse.
“Dean?”
Dean swallowed and hummed inquiringly.
“Please stop bringing up my brother while I am trying my best to sexually satisfy you. I find it both distracting and annoying, and just a little disturbing.”
“Ah... I'll shut up now.”
“Please do,” Castiel said and slunk lower on Dean's body and began to trail his hands in titillating circles across his stomach.
LMAO! GO Cas!
George's subdued protests ignited in Jimmy an immeasurable source of satisfaction. He leaned over and kissed the bare, slender collarbone.
“Castiel makes being loved look so easy,” he bit out as he leaned back. “Which is ironic because he looks like he doesn't need anyone in the world. He probably doesn't have to do anything.” He trailed a finger down the clammy sternum. “But you won't leave me, George, will you?”
They both sure have some issues, but at least Cas really was loved by his father. Jimmy, well... Jimmy feels betrayed by his mom (this is explained later) and is steadily going crazier by the day. Ah, George should have seen this coming...
"How could he entrust such a fragile body to someone as idiotic and unsophisticated as him? He wished he could keep him forever in his arms, his elegant wild cat"
Lovely words, lovely imagery.
The whole series is full of clever observations and sharp emotion colliding with perfect timing. It is a pleasure to read from chapter to chapter, the vivid sense of the universe you paint and how you play with the secondary characters has given this AU an identity of its own, kudos :))
I really wanted to create unique characters all while trying to keep some vesitgial part of the personalities of the characters from the show. I'm afraid these characters have very little to do with their original counterparts of the SPN 'verse. (please excuse the artistic license taken ^^;)
However, I do not want Jimmy to be seen as the typical "evil twin" as you will see that he has his reasons... despite how much I played with the colour scheme.
Wow! Jimmy is a sociopath! Very scary! I am happy Cas is feeling more comfortable reaching out to Dean. Poor George!!!! This is getting more and more intense!
Holy shit! Jimmy and George. Okay, let's ignore that I just temporarily freaked out and continue to the point where I tell you how this should be published. This part is particularly painful with Jimmy's presence, as it's been shadowed by so many moments in Cas' head in the previous parts, and I feel like they're both obsessed with each other in their own way. Also, I love the way you altered between Jimmy's little concert downstairs and Dean and Cas in bed. I could see it in my head, like a scene in a movie, you know, and it kind of amplified everything, especially Dean's feelings that moment. All of this is just beautifully tragic, is what it is. And really, I'd like you to keep lying about a part being the last one. I don't want it to end :(:(
Hm... I'd actually like to see this published as a Boys' Love manga... ^^
Anyhoodle, thanks so much for the lovely review <3. Yeah, they really can't let go of each other. Castiel wants to run away from him instead of acknowledging what he's done (ignoring him was only part of the problem, he also knew what else was going on with Jimmy, but refused to do anything about it -- hence the not wanting to talk about it. *gasp* Le coward!).
Ah, I still have a couple chapters up my sleeve. (hm... there may also be a surprise pairing somewhere; there are some clues.)
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“Dean?”
Dean swallowed and hummed inquiringly.
“Please stop bringing up my brother while I am trying my best to sexually satisfy you. I find it both distracting and annoying, and just a little disturbing.”
“Ah... I'll shut up now.”
“Please do,” Castiel said and slunk lower on Dean's body and began to trail his hands in titillating circles across his stomach.
LMAO! GO Cas!
George's subdued protests ignited in Jimmy an immeasurable source of satisfaction. He leaned over and kissed the bare, slender collarbone.
“Castiel makes being loved look so easy,” he bit out as he leaned back. “Which is ironic because he looks like he doesn't need anyone in the world. He probably doesn't have to do anything.” He trailed a finger down the clammy sternum. “But you won't leave me, George, will you?”
O_O Holy shit! Jimmy is dangerous! Poor George.
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Thanks! ^^
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Lovely words, lovely imagery.
The whole series is full of clever observations and sharp emotion colliding with perfect timing. It is a pleasure to read from chapter to chapter, the vivid sense of the universe you paint and how you play with the secondary characters has given this AU an identity of its own, kudos :))
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I really wanted to create unique characters all while trying to keep some vesitgial part of the personalities of the characters from the show. I'm afraid these characters have very little to do with their original counterparts of the SPN 'verse. (please excuse the artistic license taken ^^;)
However, I do not want Jimmy to be seen as the typical "evil twin" as you will see that he has his reasons... despite how much I played with the colour scheme.
Thanks for de-lurking, anyway :D
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Okay, let's ignore that I just temporarily freaked out and continue to the point where I tell you how this should be published.
This part is particularly painful with Jimmy's presence, as it's been shadowed by so many moments in Cas' head in the previous parts, and I feel like they're both obsessed with each other in their own way. Also, I love the way you altered between Jimmy's little concert downstairs and Dean and Cas in bed. I could see it in my head, like a scene in a movie, you know, and it kind of amplified everything, especially Dean's feelings that moment. All of this is just beautifully tragic, is what it is.
And really, I'd like you to keep lying about a part being the last one. I don't want it to end :(:(
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Anyhoodle, thanks so much for the lovely review <3. Yeah, they really can't let go of each other. Castiel wants to run away from him instead of acknowledging what he's done (ignoring him was only part of the problem, he also knew what else was going on with Jimmy, but refused to do anything about it -- hence the not wanting to talk about it. *gasp* Le coward!).
Ah, I still have a couple chapters up my sleeve. (hm... there may also be a surprise pairing somewhere; there are some clues.)
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