Off Kilter

[citron_presse]

Title: Off Kilter (1/1)
Fandom: Chicago Fire
Characters/Pairing: Matt Casey, Kelly Severide, Kelly+/Matt
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 1031
Disclaimer: Here

Summary: The whole evening, Matt has been unable to relax. In retrospect, at 11:30, when Severide is standing (more or less) on his doorstep, he wonders if his unease was some kind of premonition

Comments

[citron_presse]

Aw - thank you ♥

I imagine it's frustrating, but your degree may actually be putting you in the position of savoring the gloriousness of early S1 CF so, you know, silver linings!!

[citron_presse]

No, actually, 1.19 was awesome and there are definite possibilities for the rest of the season. I'm just still kind of attached to the earlier episodes . . . I'll have to let go sometime!

[waltzmatildah]

Definitely NOT three lines. BUT I AM NOT COMPLAINING!!!

Matt watches him, notes his exhaustion, his defeat; realizes that under all the bluster and blame, it’s been there the whole of the last few days, maybe longer. THISSSS!!! And it's SO incredibly like Matt to have to SEE IT IN FRONT OF HIS FACE in order to recognise it. PERFECT CHARACTERISATION IS PERFECT.

“So you get how this works now?” Matt begins, knowing it’s unfair, in more than one way, but unable to stop himself. ALSO a perfect Matt line! ARGH! As much as Kelly is your favourite, you have Matt ALL worked out when you're writing his POV.

This is gorgeous!!

THANK YOU SO MUCH! ♥

[citron_presse]

Yeah, I've pretty much abandoned the three line concept. The next prompt fill will probably be 4000 words, or something!!!

As much as Kelly is your favourite, you have Matt ALL worked out when you're writing his POV.

Kelly is for definite my favorite - but I LOVE writing Matt on the occasions I do (I think the Australian accent in my head plays a small part in this!!!), so I'm really pleased you think I do good job.

This is gorgeous!! / THANK YOU SO MUCH! ♥

As are you!! I am so pleased you liked this!!! THANK YOU ♥