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[citrus_eyeliner]

wow. i haven't posted here in forever

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[iamtheeiceworm]

goddamn. this is incredibly bogged down with despair, which is why i found it so moving, i think. rather engrossing, and it seems to flow well. you did a good job here.

i'm going to need a moment to think about whether there should be more of an ending.

and no, you didn't do a very good job of disguising the names... =)

[frieth]

No, I don't know you well enough to tell what's fiction and what is not

[citrus_eyeliner]

i began the story not intending to get to all the stuff about relationships and sex. i started it just wanting to tell the story of the cyst, but then it seemed like "whats the point?" and i couldn't make it long enough for what i needed to write for class. so i decided to try and tie the two together through the idea of the disconnect between body and mind/soul/emotion (?), and the rebellion of the body against what she is feeling and wants...if that makes any sense? my prof told me he feels like it didn't quite reach any movement yet, so i have to expand on it, so perhaps i can answer the question you have in there somewhere.

thanks for reading and commenting though. i appreciate it much.

[kilgoreyno]

Very enlightening and beneficial to someone whose been out of the circuit for a long time.