o5. Mélange
Title: Mélange
Character(s): Sungmin, Kyuhyun, Kibum, Shiwon, Leeteuk, Kangin, Donghae
Rating: PG13-NC17 range (yes, we have smut)
Word Count: 6000
Summary: So when I said I wanted to write a Christmas story for retarded vampire antics, what I meant was a November-December collection of short stories for porn and angst and I don't even know what.
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Character(s): Sungmin, Kyuhyun, Kibum, Shiwon, Leeteuk, Kangin, Donghae
Rating: PG13-NC17 range (yes, we have smut)
Word Count: 6000
Summary: So when I said I wanted to write a Christmas story for retarded vampire antics, what I meant was a November-December collection of short stories for porn and angst and I don't even know what.
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Idek where to start. I shall start with the morning sex, because morning sex = A+ in any case, but especially if it's Kibum and Siwon doing it. ♥ WHAT. GOOD PR0N. Srsly, I'm not used to that in fandom, but ohhh, this was delicious~.
Now I'm dead curious about Teuk's past. Like, who died? adhaghdhas The KangTeuk PWNZ. So hard. They seem to have a very intricate relationship and I'm glad you guys are taking your time with it. Hey, no rush. :D
asdfghjl KyuMin ♥♥♥ I feel so sorry for Min. ;~; And eventually Kyu, I guess, though he doesn't seem too concerned about The Problem yet.
The whiteout was pretty original! :D Even though it's such a tease. asddasfad
AND I ♥ THE HET. D'aaawww, Hae has a guuurl~ 8D She sounds nice. I hope there's no tricky business there. *suspicious*
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:3 The KangTeuk backstory is going to be fun. It inspires some fear in me, but it'll be worthwhile. Hopefully. XD; And you're right, the entirety of their relationship is complicated.
Kyuhyun is so adorably human and lacking decades of experience to think in terms of eternity. XD ♥
I'm sort of itching to write something from the girl's POV to get a look at Hae outside the retarded family dynamic. >.> Maybe later, if people don't protest too loudly over her. XD
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Ohhhh, the Kangteuk storyline is killing me. So very intriguing, and I have my guesses as to what happened, but I don't want to say anything in case I'm wrong.
Kyumin is adorable and I'm putting faith in Sungmin not to lose interest anytime soon...
Shibum porn is hot. Really hot. That is all.
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I'd love to hear your theories. :D Though I understand the hesitance. We're trying our best to be elusive and confusing with their backstory, too. XD;
Sungmin's personal thoughts are even more convoluted than what he revealed there. @_@ I had to limit the scope of his worries because it was just ridiculous.
XD; ...Thank you.
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And that's exactly why I'm probably wrong with my guesses. XD As long as you reveal everything eventually.
Random, but I love the way you portray Sungmin. I hate when fics portray him as a silly ball of harmless pink fluff, because of COURSE he's a ball of pink fluff, but there's something underneath that, something that's not silly or harmless in the slightest. And you portray that very well. I could totally see Sungmin as a vampire, it just suits him.
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♥! I love Min being cute as much as the next person, but it pains me to see him portrayed as cute and nothing else. He's hardly innocent or naive, and it's not like he's secretly dark/twisted/angsty inside either. He's allowed to be multi-dimensional without sticking to polar opposite extremes. XD
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