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o9. Formatia Trans Sicere Educatorum

Apr 28, 2008 12:33

Title: Formatia Trans Sicere Educatorum
Character(s): Kyuhyun
Rating: PG13
Word Count: 7800
Summary: Ninth installment. Kyuhyun attempts to escape the past, but finds that it is coded into his system.
References: Story Archive
Shout-outs: This installment was finally completed for jaded_skys ♥ Enjoy Korea~ And another huge thanks to meitachi for her help!

( the day you start to doubt it is the day you don't get through )

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cityverse April 28 2008, 16:37:40 UTC

#1 spot reserved for jaded_skys ♥

jaded_skys April 28 2008, 17:34:13 UTC

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I WILL READ/COMMENT/DIE LATER TONGHT, BUT I AM PRINTING THIS OUT TO READ BECAUSE I'M AT SCHOOL TALKING TO PROFS AND AHSDFJHSDFHJSDHGS I FRIGGIN LOVE YOU. ♥

cityverse April 28 2008, 17:40:42 UTC

♥

jaded_skys April 29 2008, 05:45:53 UTC

OK, FUCK. I LEAVE FOR THE AIRPORT IN..... LIKE 4 HOURS.

EXPECT A SUPER DETAILED FLAILY COMMENT THEN, OK???

BUT JUST FOR NOW, HOFUCK HE WENT THROUGH WITH IT HAFJSHDJGHSDJHJSHGDJKDSGKJSD YOU KEEL ME DED WITH HOMG.

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meiface April 28 2008, 16:55:14 UTC

Takes the next spot, ohoho. ♥

meiface April 28 2008, 17:16:25 UTC

Favorite sections:

1. Sungmin and Kyuhyun
2. Yunho and Jaejoong
3. "I think I came for all the wrong reasons. I probably can't undo that- I mean, no, I definitely can't, but I..."

...Need to face this, need to get up and try, try again, need to hold on this time, need to go-

"I think I need to go back."I forgot to tell you but I really do love how you're developing Kyuhyun's own abilities and helping him grow, as a person and as a player in this giant plot. It's nice to see him on his own again, even if all I want to do is shove him back into his family. (Speaking of which, I miss Hae, but that's my wild bias rearing its head again ( ... )

sapphynashi April 28 2008, 17:38:34 UTC

Developing Kyuhyun is something I've been looking forward to doing for a long time now. :D; Though I'm a little sad at the human vs. vampire ratio of our cast, ahah.

I'm glad you like DBSK~ I was a bit concerned about them because omfg huge cast, and I am rather daunted by DBSK fandom (because the handful of really good authors are, well, really good, and I am hesitant to play in that sandbox).

YES, YOU SHOULD TOTALLY WRITE KYUMIN. ♥!

Oh, Hyuk, off having adventures with Junsu in Europe...

:Dv

... *dies* And this is me being too lazy to log into the right account. Though I guess it doesn't matter anymore.

meiface April 28 2008, 17:42:39 UTC

I should talk to you about my recent gigantic crush on Sungmin recently. I don't know, I have these random fangirl fits. The love has been shared with my returning adoration for Donghae (I mean, I never stopped adoring him, but this flood of salskjd I don't even know what was kind of unexpected) and also mad amounts of Kyu!love but--

Yeah, Sungmin, so freaking hot. And amazing. And totally manlier than half his band.

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g_aria April 28 2008, 17:22:41 UTC

*pounces on* HKLjafhilafwkiuab Nooo I have to go to a funeral, will read later! I can't wait omfg (♥_♥) *would totally print it out and read in the car but has no ink left (,___,)*

cityverse April 28 2008, 17:41:44 UTC

:D It will still be here when you get back!

g_aria May 1 2008, 00:19:26 UTC

Words cannot describe how much I love this story. So I drew you a lame picture.

( ... )

interludesign May 1 2008, 00:26:21 UTC

That should totally be our mascot.

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lluvia_yuki April 28 2008, 17:36:34 UTC

Spot until I can read this properly tomorrow! ♥

cityverse April 28 2008, 17:42:59 UTC

All of this spotting and printing, haha. We're so loved! :D;

lluvia_yuki April 29 2008, 09:57:23 UTC

"Kyuhyun grimaces, then there's a crack, a horrible taste flooding his tongue, and he spits out a mouthful of ink while Ryeowook fumbles for a box of tissues and Yesung falls over himself laughing."

AHAHAHAHAHAHA YES. PEN. ♥

I think this might be my favourite installment so far. Idk why. Kyu is great. Seriously, I just loved the whole thing and have no idea what I should say about it now. Kyu got an awesome power~ I wish I could see the past too. xD And now I'm just really excited to see him return to the City and meet Sungmin again. GO KYU! I KNOW YOU GUYS CAN WORK IT OUT EVENTUALLY! It's going to break my heart if you don't ;__;

Anyway. What to say. I think everyone else has basically said it all, so there's nothing left for me to add. 8D Except maybe asdsjkdhfksjdfhkh HANKYUNG~! ♥ Oh, and yay for DBSK too! Aside from SuJu it's the only k-pop band I know of, haha. *fail*

Okay, so, six-month anniversary? Sounds awesome. 8D

...Hahaha, I really don't know what else to say, except dflkshdfjhkjagsfkjagfjkfdskjh I love you guys.

cityverse April 29 2008, 15:05:34 UTC

XD It was bound to happen to him one day, and I figure, everyone else has strength problems after they're turned, so...

I'm happy that you like it. :D It's a really important part, so I didn't want to disappoint. Waha, Kyu could do without the power and its baggage. XD It can lead to knowing some mortifying things. Well, they now have the rest of eternity to work things out? :D;

DBSK is the only other Kpop group I know enough about to really write. XD; It used to be just them and SuJu who I cared about, but that's slowly been expanding. *die*

kangkins April 28 2008, 19:24:47 UTC

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kangkins April 28 2008, 19:39:47 UTC

Okay. I. I. Um.

I love this. I love you. I love cityverse. I am also so incoherent.

I admit that when Kyuhyun was waking up, I thought, "KYUHYUN YOU STUPID BOY." Then you developed his character (and,um, I love his ability?) and I really like him more now.

From what he's gathered, the entire cognition division (made up of clairvoyants of various types, and possibly various degrees of sanity).

"That kind of talk will never work on me again. I 'saw' that time with the puppy."

♥♥

And then

He poses the question to himself harshly. It's not about music, it's not about moving on, and it's only partly about being hurt. So he was hurt, so what? He's been hurt before. But he's never been so- (scared-attached-helpless-lost) Kyuhyun has never been good at finding the right words, but since when did he stop trying ( ... )

cityverse April 28 2008, 20:12:19 UTC

I think most of the cast thinks Kyuhyun is being an idiot at some point throughout the series. XD; But I've put a lot of thought and effort into him and Sungmin, more than any of the other characters so far, so I'm glad that it's working out.

The retrocognition was definitely one of Sy's ideas, and I sort of...amped it up for the sake of intense flashbacks. We didn't want to make him too powerful, but limitations would have watered down the important scenes. :\

Haha, this installment has been a long time coming. Kyuhyun's been meant to go through this since around #5, and of course he's going to go back. ♥ The thing is that he had to come to that conclusion himself, just like how he left of his will. That's why KangTeuk couldn't save him and why Sungmin couldn't go after him. Otherwise, he's never going to learn.