Reality Can Bend (Sometimes into Impossible Shapes)

Sep 10, 2010 01:40


Title: Reality Can Bend (Sometimes into Impossible Shapes)
Rating: PG
Word Count: 6,743
Pairing: Arthur/Ariadne (established relationship)
Summary:inception_kink prompt here. "I don't want to end up like her."
Disclaimer: I dont own anything (: oh and suprockstar , this turned out longer then I had planned but i hope that's alright and I really, really hope you enjoy this ( Read more... )

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1992 September 10 2010, 08:21:00 UTC
such a lovely fic, fantastic writing!

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civillove September 10 2010, 12:10:18 UTC
thank you so much <3 :)

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scarlet_ebony September 10 2010, 11:03:32 UTC
Oh, this was absolutely beautiful. It broke my heart in every way.
I especially love the twist in the story. Usually for prompts like these, we think of Ariadne worried of turning into Mal but the part about the disease was pretty genius. And of course, how Arthur promises to always be there for her. There is so much potential in this story.
Thank you so much for posting. Don't stop writing! <3

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civillove September 10 2010, 12:13:23 UTC
aw thank you so so much, im really glad i could convey emotion in this the way i wanted to. thank you so much for reading and leaving a review <3

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dream_bigger20 September 10 2010, 11:52:26 UTC
Very interesting twist! When i read that line you used for the cut i was sure it was a reference to Mal. Great job with Ardiene, you showed her in a very interesting light.
I think there might be a minor mistake in the line: "Something a totem: hard, heavy and reassuring, couldn't provide." Thanks for sharing.

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civillove September 10 2010, 12:12:36 UTC
:) thank you very much and :O i will look over the sentence and try to fix it so its easier to read. thank you for reading and leaving a review <3

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festivewind September 10 2010, 14:33:08 UTC
This is so lovely.
And I love your have long details but not draggy.

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civillove September 10 2010, 16:15:15 UTC
Aw thank you so much, im really glad you liked it :) <3

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velvetmouse September 11 2010, 13:09:34 UTC
Oh lovely and heartbreaking. Ariadne's fear of just how many ways there are to lose reality is so true, and I love how solidly *real* Arthur is. I also really liked how annoying *right* Eames is, in his own irritating way. ;)

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civillove September 11 2010, 14:58:31 UTC
aw thank you so much :) im really glad you liked it and i made the characters real enough <3 thanks for leaving a review :D

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