this is still a wonderful chapter, I love all of the little details that just make it pop.
Thank you :-) I think this was a calm before the storm kind of chapter. The Connors are sort of floundering in the dark trying to find their footing as everything else - unbeknownst to them - is slowly going to hell around them.
and Derek giving her some of his supply of chocolate. (you know, if he didn't keep giving it to her, he might have more, hee hee)
Heh, this is very true. But if it keeps Sarah sweet it might be worth the sacrifice (no pun intended) ;-)
This is great, thank you for all of your hard work on this epic story!
You are very welcome. This one took months to write, hours and hours to then type up onto the computer (I'm old skool and write in a pad with a pen!) and two rounds of beta-ing to get it right. So it's always lovely to know that people are enjoying it.
HOLY SPIRALLING OUT OF CONTROL, BATMAN!!! (Yeah, I know I said I was gonna sleep, but fic demanded, and so, I'm telling my body to go jump in the lake. Chicken wings help. :P)
First, I need to say that Kristina is creepy as all get out... WTF, lady. Ok, you can make a personal objective decision as to which side is more likely going to win, but... baiting your former good friend and confidante who's currently a child with candy and lies, while smiling like a Cheshire cat about how you're going to kill her soon....!??? You're psycho, lady. Fockin' psychoAs annoyed as I was with JH earlier, I was totally awash with wibbly OH NOHZ in your description of him here... he's in like some kind of drugged desperation, sad and guilty and scared and alone with only his friend-brother-turned-child-killer for reachable company... The image of JH fading into black as Savannah's fate is swallowed up in screams and unknowns was really intense. Like, I said, spiralling out of control... I hope the Connors get themselves in order because the game in
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Yeah, I know I said I was gonna sleep, but fic demanded, and so, I'm telling my body to go jump in the lake.
LOL at your lack of will-power lady!
baiting your former good friend and confidante who's currently a child with candy and lies, while smiling like a Cheshire cat about how you're going to kill her soon....!???
Kris is so much fun to write. I know I shouldn't like her, but she's very entertaining.
he's in like some kind of drugged desperation, sad and guilty and scared and alone with only his friend-brother-turned-child-killer for reachable company...
Yeah, he just realises slightly too late that he's fucked up royally and been led astray by his big brother.
I hope the Connors get themselves in order because the game in play is definitely in swing, and like Derek said, the stakes are getting higher and higher...They're doing their best, but with nothing to go on all they find is more stuff that's already happened that they can't do anything about. I think I just wanted to give a glimpse of a bigger Kaliba in this part
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Well, if you see it as me having exercised enough willpower to stay awake after a sleepless weekend, then I'm pretty darned impressive! LOL
And then you have Sarah and Derek - two flashlights and a couple of guns - trying to take that on...
And that's what I'm freaking out about... ;__; I want Zeira to get its shit together to even out the odds a little, but, er.. Where is Weaver anyway?! >.>
Well, if you see it as me having exercised enough willpower to stay awake after a sleepless weekend, then I'm pretty darned impressive!
Heh, when you put it like that... *g*
And that's what I'm freaking out about... ;__; I want Zeira to get its shit together to even out the odds a little, but, er.. Where is Weaver anyway?! >.>
Remember ages ago when I said writing Weaver interested me about as much as biting my own toe nails...? Oh wait, maybe I never said that, maybe I just thought that ;-) She might well be a while defrosting...
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Thank you :-) I think this was a calm before the storm kind of chapter. The Connors are sort of floundering in the dark trying to find their footing as everything else - unbeknownst to them - is slowly going to hell around them.
and Derek giving her some of his supply of chocolate. (you know, if he didn't keep giving it to her, he might have more, hee hee)
Heh, this is very true. But if it keeps Sarah sweet it might be worth the sacrifice (no pun intended) ;-)
This is great, thank you for all of your hard work on this epic story!
You are very welcome. This one took months to write, hours and hours to then type up onto the computer (I'm old skool and write in a pad with a pen!) and two rounds of beta-ing to get it right. So it's always lovely to know that people are enjoying it.
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First, I need to say that Kristina is creepy as all get out... WTF, lady. Ok, you can make a personal objective decision as to which side is more likely going to win, but... baiting your former good friend and confidante who's currently a child with candy and lies, while smiling like a Cheshire cat about how you're going to kill her soon....!??? You're psycho, lady. Fockin' psychoAs annoyed as I was with JH earlier, I was totally awash with wibbly OH NOHZ in your description of him here... he's in like some kind of drugged desperation, sad and guilty and scared and alone with only his friend-brother-turned-child-killer for reachable company... The image of JH fading into black as Savannah's fate is swallowed up in screams and unknowns was really intense. Like, I said, spiralling out of control... I hope the Connors get themselves in order because the game in ( ... )
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LOL at your lack of will-power lady!
baiting your former good friend and confidante who's currently a child with candy and lies, while smiling like a Cheshire cat about how you're going to kill her soon....!???
Kris is so much fun to write. I know I shouldn't like her, but she's very entertaining.
he's in like some kind of drugged desperation, sad and guilty and scared and alone with only his friend-brother-turned-child-killer for reachable company...
Yeah, he just realises slightly too late that he's fucked up royally and been led astray by his big brother.
I hope the Connors get themselves in order because the game in play is definitely in swing, and like Derek said, the stakes are getting higher and higher...They're doing their best, but with nothing to go on all they find is more stuff that's already happened that they can't do anything about. I think I just wanted to give a glimpse of a bigger Kaliba in this part ( ... )
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Well, if you see it as me having exercised enough willpower to stay awake after a sleepless weekend, then I'm pretty darned impressive! LOL
And then you have Sarah and Derek - two flashlights and a couple of guns - trying to take that on...
And that's what I'm freaking out about... ;__; I want Zeira to get its shit together to even out the odds a little, but, er.. Where is Weaver anyway?! >.>
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Heh, when you put it like that... *g*
And that's what I'm freaking out about... ;__; I want Zeira to get its shit together to even out the odds a little, but, er.. Where is Weaver anyway?! >.>
Remember ages ago when I said writing Weaver interested me about as much as biting my own toe nails...? Oh wait, maybe I never said that, maybe I just thought that ;-) She might well be a while defrosting...
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