Fic - Sacrifices (5/7)
Title: Sacrifices (5/7)
Rating: R: violence, harsh language, you probably know the drill by now.
Warning: The story contains the death of a young child right at the outset, and later scenes of violence involving a child which some people may find distressing.
( Sacrifices (5/7) )
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LOL. I have - as usual - no idea where that came from. Cam's been quite back-grounded in this one, so it was lovely to write her a fun little scene and John's reaction to the bubble cracked me up.
And the parts with Derek and Sarah! ahhhhh, so wonderfully adorable but still badass! :D
They do seem to have reached a nice point of just understanding each other. Sarah knew damn well he'd be up there watching out for her, Derek knew damn well that she'd know that...
but in another part with sarah, it says that Danny had only been to the building once?Oh right, let me get this straight for myself! The building Danny's only ever been to once is the one where Kris and the T-888 and Savannah are. That's why he can't give Sarah much info on its layout. The other building is the one he works at - that's the one where Cain (and now John Henry) is. The two buildings ( ... )
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“Okay.” She shrugged at Derek and indicated her phone. “I have email on this, apparently.”
"No shit."
L.O.L. Loved this bit! I could totally see it. XD
DN38416.
...OOF. Danny's logic was airtight, but...damn, yo. Him and Sarah entire meeting was OOF. So much emotion just swirling there... ;___;
Loved Derek's "Yeah, sure" reaction to Sarah's order to stay behind and Sarah fully expecting it in the end. Love.
[Kristina] liked the personality of the one now inhabiting John Henry’s body, and had decided within the last couple of hours that she could probably grow to like the overall package, given enough time.
I know you said you like writing her, but this woman needs to be winked out. Post-haste. Have I mentioned that she's a f*cking psycho?! o_O
Without thinking Cameron blew another bubble, large enough to obscure half her face ( ... )
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*laughs* me too! I think I was channelling a bit of Strange Things... there. I adore that scene with Sarah and John at the start of that ep; "I have no idea what you just said..."
...OOF. Danny's logic was airtight, but...damn, yo. Him and Sarah entire meeting was OOF. So much emotion just swirling there... ;___;
Yeah, I had to try and find something cryptic enough to both pique their interest and give a point to meet. I guess Danny wouldn't know exactly what effect that place would have on Sarah...
Loved Derek's "Yeah, sure" reaction to Sarah's order to stay behind and Sarah fully expecting it in the end. Love.
:-) I like to think he would get the fuck out and go back to John if the odds were absolutely overwhelming, but he'd always stick around to see if he could even up those odds first.
I know you said you like writing her, but this woman needs to be winked out. Post-haste. Have I mentioned that she's a f*cking psycho?! o_OYou know, you did mention something along those ( ... )
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One of my most favorite Sarah/John scenes in S2! <333 You know, when John wasn't being a *complete* douchenugget. *smirks*
I guess Danny wouldn't know exactly what effect that place would have on Sarah...
Which made it that much more heartrending because I think he got it in a second, but then couldn't do jackshit about it except crumble more into pieces. D':
Danny, at this point, is only a couple of years older than John, yeah...??
it's all in, both barrels, no pissing about. Don't say I never do nothing for ya ;-)
*rubs hands and gets big-eyed*... Ready and waiting, girlie... Well, waiting for sure, at least... XD
p.s. I'm leaving for SF in a coupla hours, so I won't have access to a proper keyboard until Weds. evening! So reviewing's gonna be a biznitch, but I'll be on the lookout for updates!! \o/
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Mine too, I love that scene.
Danny, at this point, is only a couple of years older than John, yeah...??
I guess so. I've pictured him in his very early twenties. John by this point in these fics is tipping on 18 - eighteen months or so on from the show.
*rubs hands and gets big-eyed*... Ready and waiting, girlie... Well, waiting for sure, at least... XD
Well, I figured it flowed better this way and anyone who's actually got this far deserved not to be fucked around with cliff-hangers.
p.s. I'm leaving for SF in a coupla hours, so I won't have access to a proper keyboard until Weds. evening! So reviewing's gonna be a biznitch, but I'll be on the lookout for updates!! \o/
Heh, no worries. I'll get part 6 posted tomorrow at some point - usually mid-afternoon my time...
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No problem, I needed a bloody scorecard myself to keep this one in line!
Bring on those fireworks!
How's tomorrow sound? ;-)
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