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Fic - Monday (3/3) (Rizzoli & Isles)

Mar 23, 2012 13:26

Title: Monday

Author: cj2017

Fandom: Rizzoli & Isles

Rating: R

Category: Established R/I with a bit of everything else (and the kitchen sink chucked in for good measure!)

Word Count: Just shy of 6,000. This part 2,200.

Notes: I got a bit of a plot-bunny in my head and this was the result. Keep an eye on the time-stamps to avoid any “WTF?” ( Read more... )

fic, rizzoli & isles

Comments 18

laurel_hardy March 23 2012, 19:54:18 UTC

I believe you and sunsetwriter were extolling the virtues of Maura in boxers, especially Jane's boxers? Yeah, well, Tess Gerritsen must have overheard you:p://store.tessgerritsen.com/products/want-to-see-my-badge-boxers
Personally, I'd love to see either of them in (or out of) boxers, just not these. I love how Tess is kind enough to tell us we can wear them under clothes. Groundbreaking.

hermitstull March 23 2012, 22:17:22 UTC

Whew! For a second I wasn't sure if Maura was going to pull through. I really enjoyed how the sweet snapshots of part two contrasted with the angsty snapshots of part 3.
Great ending also and so subtle. Thanks for writing!

cj2017 March 24 2012, 09:57:03 UTC

Cheers for reading! I wasn't sure what people would make of this one, so it's really lovely to know that some folk have enjoyed it :-)

sunsetwriter March 24 2012, 11:41:10 UTC

Aw, great ending to another great story. I'll say again how much I love the realism your stories have. I also love the nurses interactions with Jane in this one. It's obvious they sense the connection between J & M without being told. I know a lot of nurses and a lot of them DO seem to have a sixth sense sometimes. (It also seems that a lot of them bat for our team too, but that's for another conversation!)

I'm not big on 'netspeak', but when it comes to those 'boxers' I have to say: WTF?? Who even knew there was a Rizzoli & Isles store? Obviously not me. And I wouldn't even call those badge things boxers. I'm glad you and I have the same idea of what boxers are. If that makes me a 'Fogey' then I'll wear that badge proudly! :-)

By the way, I'll look forward to reading A Week On Monday... ;-)

cj2017 March 24 2012, 14:56:48 UTC

I love writing nurses. I don't know why really, maybe because they have that much more connection/empathy with the patients than doctors tend to have. And LOL, in my experience, there are a hell of a lot of nurses batting for our team!

I'm with you in being a Fogey. I have no idea what those R&I boxers are all about but they certainly weren't what I envisioned Maura wearing.

As for A Week on Monday, I am never one to say never ;-)

Thanks for your lovely feedback; a pleasure as always.

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cj2017 March 24 2012, 14:59:02 UTC

Thank you :-) I think Jane would make a decent, if amusingly inept nursemaid - she's probably be able to cook up a chicken soup but then spill it all over the bed, that kind of thing *g*

I really appreciate the feedback, it'd been a while since the last fic and I always get a little nervous about posting!