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[cjnite23]

Okay, so this is driving me botsy, mainly because I decided to paint for three hours yesterday and am sick of looking at it. I know the following things:

The tree needs to be fixed (I just erased everything before because it looked at me the wrong way)

the ground needs to recede more
I need to incorporate the reds and blues into the grass/stonework

Comments

[abbydoodles]

wow carla! i know i'm not really an art person, lol so maybe my opinion isn't as helpful, but i love it! :):) Yay for Carla and her taleeeeent!! i miss you, i can't wait for you to be home! i love youuuuu

[heckers]

i found it!!!!!!! mah! ooooooooook
your lines are crazy move my eyes woot! really good with the filling the canvas
course you've always been amazingly crazy swervy good with composition lines hehe

i feel like you might want to tone down the clouds a little bit. everything else in the picture is so muted that i can't get away from them. see if you cover them up? and i don't think it's the blue i think it's just the stark white

other than that, i think just.. try not to make lines of light around things too much.. like there's kinda of a white line between where the hills mee tthe feild and where the meet the flora there on the left side.

i insanely adore the treatment of the wall. it really goes back into the picture :)
and the individual little leaves on the center tree send me into shivering giggles of joy
and it generally makes me wicked happy when you put things you do online

love you madly!