Chlollie-Ween Fic Challenge - Back to the Future 1/?

[cking1575]

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Jonathan James Kent was hiding in a place that he knew that he wasn’t supposed to be playing in…ever, his father’s loft in the barn. Jonny, as everyone but his dad called him, was playing hide and seek with his cousin and best friend Connor. Connor was spending the weekend with

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[eternal_moonie]

I totally love it!!!! So sweet and awesome!

[cking1575]

Glad you liked it!!! :D

I appreciate you leaving a comment!!! :D

THANKS!!!:D

[modscho]

Forget I ever said I'd need angst - this was HILARIOUS!
I can't even count how often I chuckled or smiled. And for that I absolutely love you lady!!
Johnny is such a cutie. Did find Clark Connor in his barn? Guess I have to wait for the 2nd part to find out - hopefully whatever RL has thrown in your way isn't too bad and you'll get over it soon. RL can be such a b**** :(
I've read in a review to the last episode that Chlollie is pretty far away again (haven't watched it yet), so thanks for giving me these awesome moments .... "I can't tell you that I haven't thought about that" ... awwww :)

[cking1575]

LOL no worries about the angst, my friend, I am thinking that it is going to work it's way into this fic. This fic has taken on a complete life of it's own. LOL

As for the R/L drama, yeah it can be such a b****, but hopefully won't last very long. :D

Thanks for leaving a comment!!! I really!!!! REALLY appreciate it!!! I am so glad that you liked the start of this. :D

[cking1575]

Awwww, thanks for leaving the comment!! :D

I can't tell you how much I appreciate that you not only take the time to read my fics but you also leave me comments too. Thanks sooooooo much!!! :D

I am so glad to hear that you like my fic. :D

[elidear]

OMG!! I love this! That is just too funny! Great story! It's awesome. I loved how Jonny said just enough to get the point across and told everyone the story of how he ended up there. And Connor is with Clark, oh, priceless. I bet he and Lois and laughing their butts off over this, yet the kicker hasn't come yet. Can't wait for the update!!!!

[cking1575]

:D Thanks sooo much for leaving a comment!!! I am soo glad that you are enjoying this fic. LOL It was supposed to be a quick one shot for Halloween, however it morphed into this monstrous fic. LOL :D

Thanks again so much for the comment. I hope you like the second post as much as this one. :D

[iluvaqt]

This is fantastic, and I feel like it must have been written before I joined the Chlollie Comm for me to have missed it. It's so much fun and the boys sound absolutely adorable.

"You broke the drawer with your knuckle head. This is your fault.”

Connor sounds like the responsible one, I think he's probably got Chloe's smarts and Oliver's cheekiness. Although Oliver's pretty smart himself. :D

And John's candid, frank conversation to Chloe about her fat stomach and no more cushions on her chest was flat out LMAO because my niece did the same thing to me. Kids'll say the darnedest things.

And Oliver, I just fell in love with him a little more when he told AC he was waiting for the right moment. And a room full of too eager eyes, isn't the right time ;)

This one's going on the memories list. I love family fics, and it's got the team and it's light and fluffy. What more win could you want? :D

[cking1575]

Thank you so much for leaving a comment. I am so sorry it's taken me so long to respond. I've been having R/L issues but I think I have them finally worked out and long story short, the final chapter is up of this fic. I do hope you enjoy it and I am looking forward to hear what you think about it. I have read all your other comments and Wow thank you so much.

Take care and I really am looking forward to reading what you think about the last chapter...even if you don't like it let me know because I really do value constructive criticism. :D

Take care and thanks again.

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