My Code Lyoko Adaptation

[matt0044]

This is the first chapter of my Code Lyoko adaptation fanfic. It's a crossover fic so it will feature characters from cartoons I use to like. Please enjoy and comment on my work if you like it and want to see the other chapters. Thanks and happy reading.

P.S. the virtual forms of Sagwa, Dongwa and Sheegwa are based on Aelita, Ulrich and Yumi's from

Comments

[calebforreal]

I didn't exactly read all of it, but from the first part that I read I noticed you didn't put some of the words in past tense. So, I think you should edit it checking for grammatical errors. There were some good points in it, though it seemed strange that it was about talking cats, the story line was pretty good. Thanks for posting this! Do you know if you could take a look at my fanfic that I posted and let me know how I could improve mine? It's posted in this community. Where are you from?

[matt0044]

Thanks. What else about my fic did you like? I'm considering continuing it or starting it over.