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Sep 11, 2006 15:50

Uh, yeah, so...not sure why I'm doing this but I'm gonna post some of my poems that I've written for Creative Writing >> They'll probably seem pretty random but oh well. She just gave us some pretty weird prompts. Please, please, please concrit. 8D Thanks.

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When I saw you standing there
my heart flip-flopped with joy and fear
You can make me ( Read more... )

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sharikazoid September 11 2006, 20:25:38 UTC
loved these ♥

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claddagh_witch September 11 2006, 20:34:49 UTC
thank you ^_^ -loves-

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myloveshine September 11 2006, 20:35:25 UTC
Aw, Hermie, I love all of your poems! All of them are so good. My favorites would have to be the Secret (such a neat idea!) and the first Untitled. When you write s'more poetry, I really look forward to reading it. :D

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claddagh_witch September 11 2006, 20:39:36 UTC
Thank you so much 8D I have another poem that I wrote in there but she still has it XD She stuck 'em up on the ceiling.

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themonsterandme September 11 2006, 20:48:06 UTC
I love them all! 1,4, and the last one are particularly good though!

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claddagh_witch September 11 2006, 21:43:30 UTC
Thank youuu! ^^ ...>> -stares at your icon <3-

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chiisai_ookami September 11 2006, 21:16:36 UTC
Awww I love these, Imouto~!!! *huggles* ^^

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claddagh_witch September 11 2006, 21:44:05 UTC
Thank you, Onesan! ^^ -snuggles- <3

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masked_chosen September 12 2006, 05:42:03 UTC
Loved them, you're really good at them ;-;

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