Prison Break - Marilyn’s Chronicles: Effervescent

[clair_de_lune]

Title: Marilyn’s Chronicles: Effervescent
Author: clair-de-lune
Character: Sucre
Genre: Gen
Rating: G
Words: ~ 500
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just borrowing them for a while.
Summary: She’s really fond of him but never fails to find him exhausting.
Notes: Thanks to torigates for her help with the translation.

Comments

[darkwriter69]

Sucre and Marilyn, what more do you need to make a stupendous fic? References to Michael of course!

Sometimes, she can see Michael sitting in their cell, his benevolence stained with a dash of exasperation, and she wants to tell him that she knows exactly how he feels.

Anyway, the bunk is Michael’s, the sheets are Michael’s... the calm, firm and useless protests when he discovers the rumpled sheets are Michael’s.

squeee, this fic is love.

[clair_de_lune]

I'm sure Marilyn and Sucre went along with each other :-p

*squeees at your squeeeing*

[burntcircles]

Oh, Sucre fic!

This POV is one-of-a-kind, and very ingenious--I've always loved fics where a character observes another, but for the POV to be Marilyn's, well...that's quite challenging, in my opinion, and you've hurdled it gracefully.

The part about Sucre getting all nervous about Marilyn going near the toilet is wonderful.

I love this. Thanks for sharing!

[clair_de_lune]

It's part of a series of POVs: the first one, on Michael, was a joke, really, but I got caught into the game and wrote more, some of them ending up a bit more serious than I first intented.

The part about Sucre getting all nervous about Marilyn going near the toilet is wonderful.
Hehe, thanks! He probably worries too much though: she's a cat, nobody would be surprised to find her in the pipes, right? ^^

I'm really glad you liked this. Thank you for your comment :)