reply to robert baydes

[claire_writes]

I am so sleepy man-
the wheels of my bike
are spending me
one by one penny
at a time-
down the jittery
street we roll
in nervous, arrogant
bunches, frightening
the cars and tightening
our limbs, like
little sovereign bullets.

Comments

[poesian]

I think this has gotta be good if I think itis at 8 AM on five ho'rs sleep yawnin' my face off. 'Though I ain't sure what a sovereign bullet is unless it's something of a neologism.

[labyrinth_wall]

a bullet that has the right to govern itself?