This is going to sound kinda weird, but it's the only way I can think to explain it. Like, a paragraph or so into the story, I actually forgot I was reading fanfiction. You just wrote it in a way that... made it seem like I was watching it on TV or something... It's didn't seem written, though it obviously was, it seemed like it was real, it was so believable, and I was just watching it on youtube or something. And... yeah. I gave it my best shot to explain that brain cookie of mine. I'm still a little confused myself.
I loved it, if that wasn't entirely clear. I think I'll give it the Best ATL Story I've Read title. :D
Oh wow, thanks so much! I tried so hard to make it believable - I watched the ATL 'Straight to DVD' with a friend about a week or so ago, and did my best to write them how I saw them. I'm so glad that's how it came across! Thanks so so much for your comment, you've made my day =)
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Like, a paragraph or so into the story, I actually forgot I was reading fanfiction. You just wrote it in a way that... made it seem like I was watching it on TV or something... It's didn't seem written, though it obviously was, it seemed like it was real, it was so believable, and I was just watching it on youtube or something. And... yeah.
I gave it my best shot to explain that brain cookie of mine. I'm still a little confused myself.
I loved it, if that wasn't entirely clear. I think I'll give it the Best ATL Story I've Read title. :D
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I tried so hard to make it believable - I watched the ATL 'Straight to DVD' with a friend about a week or so ago, and did my best to write them how I saw them. I'm so glad that's how it came across!
Thanks so so much for your comment, you've made my day =)
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So glad you liked it =D
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