[AsamiTakaba] - "My Hopes for You..."

[cland3stin3]

Title: “My Hopes for You”
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Squee again?

[misura]

Ooh, I *liked* this. Somehow, its mood is a bit cooler and more controlled than Takaba's drabble, as if it reflects the main-character's mindframe. In many ways, also, it's the perfect companion-ficlet, even if it puts more Angst in their relationship than I'd (squealingly) assumed from the first drabble.

Especially loved the touch of Asami believing that 'not telling' is the best, safest way to go. The fool. ^-^

Re: Squee again?

[cland3stin3]

Especially loved the touch of Asami believing that 'not telling' is the best, safest way to go.
Are you sure Asami wasn't being stupid there? Ha~ Glad that you're still following the flow XD Thanks for reading this one too.

[plate_chan]

Very nice! Any chance at resolution?

[cland3stin3]

Thankies :)
Resolution?
Maybe I'll continue this in an angsty full-length fic later ;)

[subaru_san]

If I may make a suggestion, maybe a full-length fic should sort of recap these two parts? Maybe make it a fic with two POVs?

Cynthia

[cland3stin3]

Um... I'm not good at POV fics. My fics are always in 3rd person POV, where I can describe what all characters think and manipulate words easily in a wider scope.

Yep, your suggestion that I recap these two parts is really nice. I'll try to fit in the upcoming fic with my Feilong drabble as well :)

[teecub]

These drabbles are very well-written! They make me want to snuggle the both of them and make them talk things out! <3<3<3

[cland3stin3]

Thanks a lot for reading ^__^ Really glad that you like 'em ;)

[aoi_aka]

This is good! I can't wait for the next part. :)

[cland3stin3]

Weee... thanks a lot for reading. Um.. the next part is kind of... Feilong-centric. Just don't kill me for the bits of FeixTakaba-ness ~__~

[aoi_aka]

I think Feilong is my second fav character. The first being Asami. I won't kill you for the FeixTakaba-ness! ^_^

[cland3stin3]

Feilong is actually my most beloved character... Huhuhu... I like him, I like Asami, but I don't like AsamixFeilong because in my fangirl mind, Asami is too meant for Takaba.

Yeah, I'm one posessive bastard XP

I never liked giving my favourite seme in all stories to people not meant for him. The perfect example being Gravitation. I can pair Shuichi with practically everyone, but I can NEVER pair Yuki up with anyone other than Shuichi.

Ha~

[doitwell]

Awww, Asami's hope that Takaba will sooner or later know that his feelings are real and not about seeing him as a possesion anymore,ohhh,I could just melt!! If only these two could be open with each other, they could both(hopefully)have what they want most-knowing that they have the love of the other. But then that might mean a quick end to the story. Hmm, I guess they'll have to wait a while longer ha,ha! Looking forward to the next post:}

[cland3stin3]

If only these two could be open with each other
I wish....

But then that might mean a quick end to the story
True, true. Then all the excitement would be gone XD

Thanks for reading ;)