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[TezuRyo Fic] - Seal of Trust - #2: Broken

Aug 24, 2006 15:20

Title: Seal of Trust - #2: Broken
Fandom: Tenipuri
Pairing: Pillar Pair (TezuRyo)
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1,685
AN: Introducing OC, Shindou Hiroki, as the innocent catalyst of the plot. Unbetaed piece of work as per usual. This is part 2 out of three in my pillar pair 'Seal of Trust' series, written as an attempt to minimise the angst in my usual ( Read more... )

tenipuri, tezuryo

Comments 42

redgreenapple August 24 2006, 22:19:42 UTC

really enjoyed it hope you add part 3 soon.

cland3stin3 August 24 2006, 23:32:58 UTC

Thanks for reading :) I'll try to post ASAP.

syldana August 24 2006, 22:59:09 UTC

I'm really enjoying this so far. Tezuka's anger was especially nice. Looking forward to the next part! ^__^

cland3stin3 August 24 2006, 23:38:50 UTC

Tezuka has always been too cool for his own good. I'm terribly annoyed with Tezuka in the Zenkoku Taikai Hen OVAs. He barely speaks! *Oh, poor Okiayu-sama's voice doesn't get to be heard!*

He needs to be angry once in a while, don't you think? I'm glad you're enjoying this so far ^__^

syldana August 25 2006, 00:55:22 UTC

I know! I think we get more of him in the next one, though, as it's finally his turn to play. ^__^

cland3stin3 August 25 2006, 03:44:06 UTC

I hope so. I'm really looking forward to Tezuka vs. Kite match. Don't you think that Kite looks a bit like Tezuka somehow? :)

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lilbunnyfufu022 August 24 2006, 23:43:33 UTC

Hummm... Echizen with glasses and being all cold. Is he trying to imitate Tezuka? Totally weirdness. Honestly I think Tezuka's inner gay was coming out when he 'slapped' Fuji. Otherwise I could never see Tezuka as the slapping type. Unless of course it was the manly back hand that screams punching is for brutes and I am a gentleman.

cland3stin3 August 24 2006, 23:52:13 UTC

I just need him to be angry, even for just a split second. Reading his profile in Wikipedia just pissed me off. And I've coddled Fuji quite too much in my previous fic (okay, not so much in the last few ones). I couldn't have him punching Fuji's beautiful face - yet

Inner gay... *dies laughing*

Thanks for reading!!

lilbunnyfufu022 August 25 2006, 00:33:01 UTC

Fuji has a beautiful face indeed. With is squinty eyes and innocently evil smile. What is not to love, but just stay away from the wasabi sushi.

cland3stin3 August 25 2006, 03:00:39 UTC

What is not to love, but just stay away from the wasabi sushi.

You want me to die laughing, don't you?
XD

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xorange_tangox August 25 2006, 01:45:42 UTC

Oh good God. I can only giggle breathlessly at the sheer emotion rolling off this fic, especially the section where Fuji confesses to Tezuka and gets punished. Very well written.

cland3stin3 August 25 2006, 03:04:08 UTC

Mwahaha... I love that part too. Honestly. I enjoy writing Fuji, especially when he's behind the plot ;)

Thanks a lot fo reading ;)

cland3stin3 August 25 2006, 03:08:01 UTC

Btw, your icon is cracks me up XD!! Tezuka... LOL~

cland3stin3 August 25 2006, 03:08:13 UTC

Btw, your icon cracks me up XD!! Tezuka... LOL~

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kiyousei August 25 2006, 06:09:28 UTC

wow... me likely a lot! ^_^ so angst.. LOL

aww... "There was gentleness in his gestures in contrast to his indifferent expression. Hiroki was right; Ryoma acted much more differently when he didn’t know they were looking." LOL so Ryoma has a vengeful side too?? ^^

i can't believe Tezuka slapped Fuji 0.o i was like holy crap... but i can see why he did -__- bad fuji

cland3stin3 August 25 2006, 10:46:53 UTC

Hehe... I thought it's no secret that Ryoma is bound to have a vengeful side?
^___^
And the Tezuka 'bitch-slapping' Fuji thing was where I had the most fun writing~
Thanks for reading!!!