[Yuki x Shuichi] - Songs for Eiri

[cland3stin3]

Title: Songs for Eiri
Fandom: Gravitation
Pairing: Yuki Eiri x Shindou Shuichi
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2,104

After reading Gravitation - Voice of Temptation novel by Maki Muraki and Jun Lennon, I decided to return to my long neglected fandom: Gravitation. To those who already know who I am, hello again. And to those who are new to me (and vise versa),

Comments

[calou]

really sweet

[oran_chan]

Very well written, cland3stin3! I actually have not come across a worthy Gravitation fanfiction in quite a while; so long, in fact, that I had almost given up searching. Thank-you for igniting my faith for this wonderful fandom agian. It seems that there are true writers out there, and it makes me glad.

First of all, the entire story was very original, and a new take on the characters was quite refreshing. I enjoyed Yuki's more caring side, instead of his usual "I-don't-give-a-damn" demeanor. You've written this so well, in fact, that Yuki was not out-of-character, nor was it cliche in any way. I applaud you for this; it is rather difficult to accomplish showing a different face of a character to the readers, but you've managed beautifully.

You have also convinced me that Shuichi can control himself and his emotions when he needs to, and that he can be mature when the time is necessary. I honestly adored this portion of the story:

“Why would I want him to write lyrics for songs that I sing? I sing most of the song for him; and if

[shurikenblades]

OMG
made my day, shit XD
cleverist clever ever :B