[TezuRyo] Like Blood - Second Half

[cland3stin3]

Title: Like Blood
Fandom: Tenipuri
Pairings: TezuRyo vs. FujiRyo
Genre: Major angst, romance
Rating: R… bordering on NC-17.. o_O
Word Count: 9,910
Somewhat future!fic, and not for kiddies. I can never leave out Atobe, after all. I love him too damn much to exclude him =D  And when I say TezuRyo [VERSUS] FujiRyo, I mean it.

Continued from the first half [

Comments

[lanerose]

You made me cry. And then you fixed everything. Except Fuji. Poor Fuji! ;_; But still, this was... wonderful. Thanks for sharing!!!

[cland3stin3]

Because this fic is an excuse for me to torture poor Fuji... Nah, I'm just kidding.

Hehe... Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a comment ;) Hope you like it.

[surealistic_des]

ah this was depressing.... ;___;
poor Fuji....

but I suppose looking on Fuji's part: if you really loved someone, you would let them go even if you knew their going to be happier with someone else..

but it was wonderful nonetheless... ^_____^

[cland3stin3]

I guess Fuji was just hoping that Ryoma would one day change his mind XD

hehe... sorry for this being depressing. I hope you had a good read =)

And thanks a lot for reading and taking the time to comment =^__^=

[kaorismash]

*grins* Yay! It's out and finished~ X3 I loved Ryoma's relationship with Atobe, that is just love, but that doesn't beat TezuRyo! I love that lighthearted flashback of them on the balcony of the hotel even more. That was so... JSEI BTIWEYV WEB&$*I&!!

My only issue with this is that it's too fastpaced, I find that things move too quickly, but since you compacted it into a oneshotish ficcie, that's alright. But that aside...

Is it horrible of me to actually enjoy Fuji being in all that pain?

Though I still can't wrap my mind around alcoholic!Ryoma, bragging!Fuji and wordy!Tezuka, somehow it all fits. Yeah, amazingly enough. *pokes* X3 ♥

[cland3stin3]

Yeah, definitely too fast-paced. I was damn worried about that too, but if I make it into multichaptered fic, I'm afraid I'll neglect it T___T

Is it horrible of me to actually enjoy Fuji being in all that pain?

No, not at all. I myself feel like this fic is just an excuse to torture poor Fuji XD

I think I laughed when I wrote "What the hell happened to you?" from Tezuka to Ryoma. But since he's over 20-years-old, I'll give him a leeway to be just a little bit wordy. XP

I might revise or add some stuff later, if I have time for it.

Hope you enjoyed the read, dahling~ Thanks for the comment!

[cland3stin3]

LOL! Unsurprisingly! :D
I can never resist Atobe. Ever. *sigh* It's sometimes hard to choose between Atobe and Tezuka for Ryoma, seriously.

I'm glad you like the TezuRyo flashback. Believe it or not, that was the first thing I wrote before writing the beginning, the middle and the end of the story XP

[karorumetallium]

I cried. Then I was hot and warm and fuzzy all over. Thanks for giving us this.

[cland3stin3]

I hope they were good tears =D
You're very much welcome, and thanks a whole bunch for reading and taking the time to comment ;)