Title: Flip ‘er (1/2)
Author: clanket
Pairing: Callie/Arizona
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Callie and Arizona smut. This is basically a two-parter PWP. I think the title will make sense after part two (kinda…)!
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So here's a fun phenomenon! I read this over first in an email and am also leaving a review. Strange how that works. ;) Cough.
Anyway, super sexy job my friend. I'm glad that this didn't make it to the dark place of your computer; where all your first attempts go to die. It's so good. And so sexy. And you write smut like a fuckin' pro. So never ever doubt yourself.
I particularly like that Arizona needs Callie to talk to her. I think that's so freaking sexy and such a great way to connect in the bedroom. So even if you're the receiver, everyone gets their voice. HA!
I think I'm pretty hilarious.
I also really liked that callie and arizona kinda joke about how it being 'just okay' even though we all know that it was earth shatteringly good. Get it, Calzona.
Anyway, mm. I can't wait for the next part. Knowing you I'll be 28 by the time it's posted. ;)
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In all fairness, this did go to that dark place for a while (awhile) but it seems to have found the light once more! And hopefully its twin will be along shortly, as well!
Thanks for calling me a smut slut, I appreciate it LOL I'm glad it doesn't come off as silly as it feels to write because that would be pretty bad, like that time we were trying to write Stranger Than Fiction LOL
The next part? Better late than never!
Thanks for the critique, walrus ;)
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For some reason Ace of Base just began to play in my head:
"I saw the signnn and it opened up my eyes..."
Lols.
Ohh, girl. You did NOT come off like S.T.F. (I want to looove you, Pretty young thang). Shit, my brain's like a caffeinated iPod shuffle.
Anyway, yeah, yeah, yeah I'll believe it when I see it, wife. This is me with the eyebrow face. (Not the unibrow face, Frau).
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Stay tuned for the second chapter and thanks for reading!
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