Fic: The winds long to play with your hair (LMOTP)

[clanne]

Title: The winds long to play with your hair
Fandom: Little Mosque on the Prairie
Disclaimer: I, as per usual, own nothing. I just borrow and wreck havoc.
Spoilers: Season Three
Summary: She doesn’t know why she still says ‘if’.

Pairing: Rayyan/Amaar with some token Rayyan/J.J.

Forget not that the earth delights to feel your bare feet and the winds

Comments

yipeeee!

[anonymous]

:jumps up and down in seat and bounces off it and falls with ass hard on floor::

It's been like FOREVER! I'd nearly given up (i used to check everyday until I admit - i got bored of rereading the amaar's serious parents fic) but awesome!

Will get back with a more coherent review.

so...

[anonymous]

more coherent review.

what I loved: Amar's calves. And the part where she liked having Amaar seeher hair
JJ's outoftownness

what i did not like: JJ seemed kinda...off - but that's okay. I don't like him displacing Amaar.

PLEASE Clanne. write more fic. you're so good at this and it sorta helps the obsession.

love
Joey

Re: so...

[clanne]

Yeah, no, I didn't like how I wrote JJ either. But I decided it would be too cruel to you to leave this on my computer and never post it for that reason alone.

I'm doing my best to write more, but it's difficult! Why don't you send me some prompts?

Re: so...

[anonymous]

woo hoo! I love prompts.

so i got several - i'll give you sorta toughies...hehehe.

1. Amaar's ex fiancee has already come and the news is she's ready to move to Mercy if he agrees to reconsider their marriage and how Rayyan and the town would react

OR

Amaar is courting some nice Mosque singleton and how Rayyan & the town react to that.

2. Dealing with a mopey Baber when Layla goes to visit her mother in Pakistan. It should be an Amaar/Rayyan fluff post engagement/marriage/acknowledgement of true love

Re: so...

[clanne]

I LOVE #1!!! It will be written, but perhaps not immediately.

[anonymous]

this was FANTASTIC, i loved it :)