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[clarkington]

He turned his eyes skyward to find that there was no sky to speak of; he could only see the mammoth brick buildings to either side stretching up taller than his gaze could follow, and beyond that was a dark blanket of smog that caught the light of the city below.  He could tell it was night, but the moon and the stars were all hidden from view.

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[prince_auryn]

Hi! It's me! Just letting you knonw I'm still reading these, if slowly. I don't know if you want critiques on these or what, but my only recommendation her is start less sentences with 'he'. Thank you, goodbye!
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