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[claudia_lexan]

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[serendip50]

Great update.

HIT HIM, boy, it seems Sam dosn't know the half of it. Some terrifying secrets seem to be on the horizon!!! Possibly...

[claudia_lexan]

Very bad secrets about deans life with John will be coming out in the following chapters and none of it is all that good. Sam will get better with his attitude towards Dean but it will be slow going .

[marie72]

love this...post more soon....

[claudia_lexan]

Next part should be up at the weekend

[the_coconut_dog]

Oh oh...What a delicious fight...I love it! I cannot wait to find out more about Dean! And Sam, for that matter. I wonder what he has been up to.

[claudia_lexan]

A conversation between Sam and Dean in the next chapter sorts out some of the questions this chapter has left open, but not all of them. Over the next few chapters we get to find out what Dean has been up to

[the_coconut_dog]

Ohh I can't wait now!*throws food at you* More energy---more writing! *just kidding here*

[claudia_lexan]

the fifth chapter has already been written I just have to type it and send it to my beta. That chapter is mainly a phone conversation between bobby and dean. It has Dean just venting.

[nachekana]

Great update! I love how cynical Dean is. Not that I'm happy he is, but it's really enjoyable to read. I'm still firmly on Dean's side on this one.

PS: Noooooooooo, I don't want John to be a bad father!!! Oh, wait, he already kind of was... Ok, I don't want him to be a worse father!! :P

[claudia_lexan]

Due to the way life went for Dean after Sam left him with his dad, he is far more cynical than he should be. I know John is a bad father in this story and it only gets worse, but for Dean to be that bitter and cynical there has to be a good reason behind it. I will attempt to make sure that John has at least one or two redeeming qualities about him.

[claudia_lexan]

Thank you, It's my attempt at writing what Dean would be like as the little brother