I would just like to ask you why you have chosen to re-write Tangled, the original had so much more detail and emotion in it, it had 36 chapters and the last post was sometime in 2008. I had hoped to see the story continued because it was really really good, but this version just seems kinda rushed. The original had me on the edge of my seat waiting to find out what was going to happen next to Dean and his pregnancy and then with his baby, his relationship with his family etc.
I originally began to post this on fanfition.net. Most of the reviews I received were very good, but I had a very bad one that put me of writing anything for a while. It really made me doubt writing ever again. after a while I did come to realize the review had some good points I did need a beta and my spelling wasn't as good as it could. I thought that be re-writing it, I could fix the story and change some of the parts I just wasn't happy with. As for baby Alexander, I had made originally made the decision that he should stay dead., but I couldn't be mean. I did write a chapter that involved the bay being bought back but at a price that one of Winchesters had to pay. It is still a chapter I may use. The story is continuing, but at a slower and more improved pace.
I wanted you to know I caught up on this story because I really enjoy it. It has so many real emotions and challenges along the way. I do hope the curse can be broken at some point in the story. I do hope the Dean can over come what he has gone through the last nine months or so. I hope Sam learns what has gone on and tries his best to be on terms with Dean...since i am not sure they curse will be broken or if Sam will get his memories back to have the REAL LOVE he has for Dean again. And for John I hope he learns to have a heart!!!! I can't wait to read more.
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why can't you let dean happy with sam?
but i like this story like a lot...
Thanks for the quick update
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