Comments | claytonzjones: A bit of writing.

claytonzjones

A bit of writing.

Mar 12, 2010 04:59

Going through the old journal I found some stuff that friends had written when I asked for things to inspire me. One piece in particular did inspire me and I wanted to do something particularly emotional. So if you do read this I'd like to know how it hit you.

( Val you might not want to read this. If you do I'm sorry if it dredges things up, but it's based on a couple sentences you wrote to inspire me a couple years ago. )

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dripbat March 12 2010, 10:31:57 UTC

SO MANY LINES! What the heck? But man.. I wrote that?

claytonzjones March 12 2010, 10:54:26 UTC

"I'm not crazy!!" she exclaimed throwing her fits at him. He just stood there, allowing her fits to pound his chest. "Darling, look at yourself. You're falling apart." She stopped, and looked deeply into his eyes and started to cry. "You did this to me." She then fell to the floor sobbing. And he just continued to stand in his place, moving only his face to look to her. "Please, don't do this. You know it's for the best."
"The best?!" she screamed in between gasps of air, "The best for you!"

That is what you originally wrote.

dripbat March 12 2010, 10:59:13 UTC

Oh okay. XD But still wow.
Thats awesome! :D

claytonzjones March 12 2010, 11:01:20 UTC

There were two other excerpts I might flesh out in the near future. Maybe into something a little longer than this was.