Baby's Cry

Feb 07, 2006 23:36

The charred, smoky remnants of dinner creep silently throughout the darkened house ( Read more... )

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skivvygirl February 8 2006, 15:02:23 UTC
I'm kind of torn about using swears in poetry. On one hand it might be the truth, and it expresses a certain anger or feeling that could possibly not be espressed in any other way. On the other hand, I kind of feel it cheapens the poem, and makes the reader aware that they are only reading poetry. In other words, it takes them out of them poem for a moment. I just don't know.

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