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[anetode]

I've not composed a poem in a few years, and this one was done in a strange mood when not exactly sober. The structure and rhyming are weird, but I'm not sure what to do with it

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[majestic_lies]

I really like the way you set up the poem. you form language very well, whether unedited or done several times. you seem to know what to put where and i realy like that.
It was enjoyable. xD.

p.s. new? welcome if so.