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Jul 20, 2005 12:37

people brought us flowers
to place them where we lay
but you cannot fill the darkness
of an empty grave

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buckshot_mc July 20 2005, 05:30:27 UTC
Were you looking at a old cemetery ?

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forgottenevil July 21 2005, 11:16:01 UTC
actualy i woke up with it in my head. have no idea why :)

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nessarose39 July 22 2005, 02:06:46 UTC
short and simple, but it got me thinking, and i like any poem that makes me think for longer than it took me to read.
when you really think about it, it is a strange custom bringing flowers to cemeteries.

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forgottenevil July 25 2005, 03:26:54 UTC
thankyou.
im flattered *blushes*
yes it is indeed a strange custom

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My Take buckshot_mc July 22 2005, 07:42:43 UTC
It made me think of old skeletons buried in a unkempt cemetary?
Who leaves flowers for the forgotten?

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Re: My Take forgottenevil July 26 2005, 02:55:14 UTC
indeed, i can see that.
who should leave flowers for the forgotten?

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