Primeval- "Changes I Don't Want to Undo"

[clearday_4ever]

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[curia_regis]

This is interesting!

I think that Nick might be more surprised at Stephen's pregnancy! *g* Most of the guys I know probably would go running out of the room if they realised that another guy was pregnant. Obviously your Nick is a lot more open-minded. *g*

[clearday_4ever]

Actually, I kind of figured him to be still in the struck dumb stage/Stephen-alive stage. He'll probably do a spastic fit in the coming parts. ;)

[fififolle]

OMG! 'Scuse my French. I love this *squeee* Ahahhahaha!
I think it's awesome the way stuff has changed and my, my, doesn't Primeval just lend itself to MPreg? *g* Just a little tweak on the DNA here and there, LOL!!
“Nick came home acting a little weird. He came in the front door instead of the kitchen door. Then he just about shit himself when I spoke behind him. Next he acted as if he’d never seen my bump before. Finally, I called him Cutter a couple of times and he didn’t do the whole indignant speech about us both being a Cutter so why would I talk about myself… And then there’s just this gut feeling that something’s happened.” Stephen pointed out all of the little things that had caught on his consciousness.

Brilliant!!! I loved how Stephen notices, just like Cutter said he would and these are cute little changes :) And LOL to Stephen's paranoia :)
So! Keep up the good work, I for one look forward to more.
Connor - up the duff - LOL!!! Loved their little conversation :D

Okay, back to writing! Thanks for the little break! :)

[clearday_4ever]

Thanks. The paranoia is something I experienced first hand when my sister-in-law was pregnant. At one time she accused me of being the reason the sandwich shop had forgotten to put cheese on her sandwich. Every little thing she noticed and picked at people about. It seemed like something Stephen would have a bad time accepting from himself.

[joereaves]

Finally got around to reading this. Loving it so far. Btw at the start the house number changes from 1251 to 125. You'll want to stick to 125 we Brits rarely have house numbers as high as 1251.

[clearday_4ever]

My Brit-beta told me that. I tried to catch them but I was kind of in a hurry. I'm glad you liked it. I'm kind of distracted with job-hunting so I don't have a lot of time to write right now. But as soon as I have a job I will be back writing!

[joereaves]

Cool. I figured the change might be due to editing it to make it British and missing one but since I wasn't sure which one was the typo I figured I'd mention it :D

[clearday_4ever]

Thanks! As an American, I need all of the help I can get to make it sound in-canon.

SuzaLulu layout for you~♥

[takerzmuse]

Sorries that it took so long. TT__TT

Um. I hope it looks okay on your computer, what with the differences between ours. It seems fine on mine, but let me know if there's something I need to adjust.

Re: SuzaLulu layout for you~♥

[clearday_4ever]

Wah! It's great! I can't see anything that needs adjusting, but give me a few days to get over the squee of 'new layout w/ SuzaLulu'.

Thanks! *kisses cheeks*

Re: SuzaLulu layout for you~♥

[takerzmuse]

Yay~ I'm glad~! *smooches back*

[jalabert]

Brilliant!

I loved the peek into this alternate world and I love Nick's willingness to adapt to it, to do anything necessary to have Stephen again--even if it means becoming the father of two unexpected children.

[clearday_4ever]

I'm glad you liked it. And now with the new season having started here in the States I should be able to find the inspiration to write some more!