We Are All Illuminated [3]

[clearillusion]

Comments

[_profiterole_]

OMG, you were so mean to Arthur! D: *cuddles Arthur* *and Eames as well*

I thought the wife, or possibly the husband (or someone working for him), had exchanged the die. Or maybe that they were all in a really well made dream where only Arthur's totem had been made wrong. It's not like Cobb hides his totem much IRL.

[clearillusion]

I'm glad the reveal came as a surprise, I was worried that wasn't going to work out as I hoped. And thank you for reading! :D

[_sapphiredreams]

I found this story to be good. I really enjoyed it. However, just so you know, you have some trouble with tense at times. Ie. in part one, "Arthur is stood," instead of "is standing." I wouldn't even mention it if it wasn't a good story otherwise. I really liked the plot. :)

[clearillusion]

Thank you very much - it's something I'll definitely look into in the future :)

[clair3]

a good read indeed!

[clearillusion]

Aw, thank you so much for saying so! :)

[uchiha009]

this is definitely a masterpiece. it's breathtakingly, heartbreakingly wonderful, so much so that I finished reading this story twice, even though, there's no PWP -- which is my default reading type.
and there's PLOT~!! i really enjoyed E's POV. love the way he HAS to hold on to Arthur to convice both of them that A's still there, in reality, with E by his side.
there's no enough word in this world can describe how much I love the story and of curse, you. 'hugs'

[clearillusion]

Thank you very much - really glad you liked it so much!

[emmajane14]

You basically just broke my heart...in an achingly beautiful way. Amazing work, truly excellent!

[clearillusion]

Thank you very much!