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One Step Closer - 15

Nov 03, 2011 14:27

Title: One Step Closer
Author: Mianhechii
Unbeta-ed
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: R
Genre: Romance, slight Drama, MPREG
Length: 15/?
Summary:

When a lie was heard and Jaejoong’s heart broke into pieces, how will Yunho make his life complete after they got married and found out that love isn’t a part of it?

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rating-pg, title - one step closer, genre-romance, genre-mpreg, fic-chaptered, genre-drama

Comments 29

otakusj November 3 2011, 12:20:46 UTC

i'm evil so i'm happy they broke up. coz ht talk about cheating really hit me and i'm so sad for moonbin.
it's really the right decision.
honestly, i had many emotions while reading this, first happy with binnie and yun's dance..then mad at jae for his attitude..then pity etc.
i really love yun's char here..so mature, so great..i would love to have an appa like him too if i were binnie. though he was a jerkat that one time only, he's totally different now..and jae's at fault too coz he hid binnie and made an imaginary family with dojoon.

purplefin November 3 2011, 12:28:55 UTC

This chapter is heartbreaking..I understand Jae for doing this but because of his decision it's hurting the three of them. Yunho will probably feel guilty for breaking up Jae and Doojoon. Well, Moonbin's welfare must come first anyway. On the other hand, Doojoon is a nice guy and he really did a lot for Jae but I'm still rooting for Yunho..^^..hehe..

agnes28 November 3 2011, 12:31:09 UTC

omg, jae hitting moonbin.. if i was yunho i would angry towards jaejoong too.
yeah, jae that the best decision if you want your moonbin happy and have a complete family..
i hope doojoon find new love :)

donud November 3 2011, 14:34:08 UTC

i really wanna know one thing.. did Jae really didn't love YunHo anymore? even just a little??? will Jae can loving back YunHo? please give a hint.... pleaseeeeeeee.... ^^

shouichi November 3 2011, 14:56:04 UTC

Oh SH1T!!!! THEY ARE BREAK UP!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! am I... am I the only one who hates to see their break up??? I know it's not healthy if jaejoong were still with DooJoon if YunJae were married. but since Yunho is a jerk from the past till now (seriousely, saying "If you continue being like this, I will take him away from you!" is a jerk!! you're not the one who gave birth to him, who raised him, now you want to take him away!!!!???), sorry.... I would say "It's healty on this story only, If jae were still wih doojoon". LoL

Don't worry, Jung.. if Jae cheating with DooJoon, you can cheating with me, hun!! xD