One Step Closer - 15

[cleichiisai]

Title: One Step Closer
Author: Mianhechii
Unbeta-ed
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: R
Genre: Romance, slight Drama, MPREG
Length: 15/?
Summary:

When a lie was heard and Jaejoong’s heart broke into pieces, how will Yunho make his life complete after they got married and found out that love isn’t a part of it?

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Comments

[crystaldee]

Hhhhh...the breaking up happened...
I'm okay with the separation between Jae and Joon in the end, but YunHo shouldn't have threatened Jae for taking Binnie away from Jae. That's just so mean of him. Jae's the one who's hurt the most after Yun left him and now Yun just easily come back and claimed his son? More over ruining the relationship that has been built for years between Jae, Bin and Joon just like that just because Yun is Bin's father by blood? It's just so unfair.

Waiting for the next part....^___^

[yoojiyool]

Oh my god,,this is it,,
i know and understand what jaejoong means by don't wanna hurt binnie by let doojoon go,,because, for binnie his only true appa is yunho,,
and yunho,,u r so wise baby,,!!!

thank u for update,,!!!>.<
love it~

[mourningtea]

Yunho is an unbelievable jerk. And what's the most unbelievble part for me is the Binnie closeness to his father. You know, Donjoon is the real father for the baby, he raised him from the beginning and there is no chance to the normal child to let go of his appa for someone who just came out from nowwhere. It's such a nonsense.

I think you should try and explain this part for the readers because all this cliffs sounds truly unrealistic for me.

[kattan69]

Yunho must be a saint....cuz he is just too perfect...or are you trying too hard to convince us readers to accept him to be with Jae. To be honest, it is really unfair for the other guy who was there for Jae and Binnie all those times. I also find it strange that Binnie is so mature for a 3 years old...and why he so accepting for AppaYunho to be together when he didn't question why AppaJoon is also not with his umma before that...mmmm..and did anyone not question why Yunho didn't make any effort to contact Jae all the time he was away. Yunho can accuse Jae of hiding his child from him but Jae can ask him did he ever make an effort to call him and ask about Jae's well being. All these times, there were none...and there were best of friends. Dont't forget Yunho has a relationship when he is in the States. I just hope you put it in cuz it looks like the story is moving heavily one-side in Yunho's favour.

[kattan69]

Have to apologies for ranting so much....pls forgive me..it is just that I'm so passionate about your story....your writings brings out the feelings of the characters that we feel so deeply for them. I know eventually it will be Yunjae in the end and that the breakup is necessary for the story to go on...so pls do continue your wonderful story and don't stop writing. I truly love your story.

Anyway, wish you a happy birthday! Hope you have a good time celebrating your big day.

[jaeho37]

I really love how controlled yunho was during that fight scene and even if a tiny mini part of me is kinds feeling bad for doojoon it's better that way ...and I it was good that they broke because in the end they would of only hurt moonbin GOD I LOVE YUNHO CHARACTER HERE!!! XD it very admirable

[cleichiisai]

I don't think I'll update this any sooner... Anyways, thank you.