Just wanted to post this poem I wrote for English. The assignment was to write about people's relationships to food. Please comment, so I can see if this is funny or even good to anyone besides my family
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That poem is really good and entertaining. I generally don't consider the differences between people's eating habits to be funny, but the poem accomplished that.
Also aahhh, I didn't realize the essay had to be 500 words!! SHIT!! Mine is 700!!!!!
I liked the poem, especially since I know your family. Good luck with Dieg, though - I am dreading tomorrow's class!!!!
Btw, I don't really think Dave Grohl was imitating Kurt Cobain - he was just being crass. Kurt was quieter, more angsty, less talkative. Just saying. But yeah, Rivers Cuomo = god.
yay for writing!meanie9494October 17 2005, 01:26:57 UTC
your poem is very good, so it inspired me to write a somewhat deep story (which will fall flat...unlike your poem) I like the way you ended your rhymes (even if it didn't rhyme:-))
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Also aahhh, I didn't realize the essay had to be 500 words!! SHIT!! Mine is 700!!!!!
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Btw, I don't really think Dave Grohl was imitating Kurt Cobain - he was just being crass. Kurt was quieter, more angsty, less talkative. Just saying. But yeah, Rivers Cuomo = god.
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I like the way you ended your rhymes (even if it didn't rhyme:-))
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