Opportunity (1/1)

May 21, 2012 14:33

Opportunity
Teens
Genre: Gen, Challenge, Episode-Related
Episodes: Summit
Warnings: mild adult content
Synopsis: It was forbidden, but from the moment Baal learned Apophis had broken the law, he was consumed.
Notes: Written for my " A-to-Z Stargate" challenge; campylobacter requested a Baal/Qetesh story with the prompt "Harcesis"

Opportunity )

series: a-to-z stargate, genre: challenge, pairings: gen (no pairings), character: vala mal doran, warnings: adult content, timeline: season 05, genre: episode-related

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cleothemuse May 21 2012, 20:42:17 UTC
Thanks! ^_^

One of these years, I'll have to find the time to write my complete head-canon backstory for Vala...

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campylobacter May 22 2012, 03:59:19 UTC
Oooohhh if you can weave Vala's backstory into a Daniel/Vala adventure where SG-1 winds up on her home planet, I will die in happy fangirl squee.

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cleothemuse May 22 2012, 04:05:44 UTC
That's the idea ;)

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"Opportunity" by @cleothemuse #Stargate Ba'al/Qetesh fanfic (PG-13/Teens) campylobacter May 21 2012, 19:24:23 UTC
OMG OMG OMG

This clicks all the little jigsaw puzzle pieces of canon together... Vala being freed from Qetesh by a Tok'ra (will she discover a Tok'ra-incited rebellion on her planet?), Ba'al & Qetesh's "spark", how Vala learned to recognize the symptoms of early pregnancy in time to get Tomin to marry her, skills in hand-to-hand combat she might've learned from her mother or in her exploits with Jacek...

YAY YAY YAY YAY amazing work! I'm so glad the 2-year wait for this IS SO WORTH IT.

(oh and NUDE BA'AL yes yes yessss)

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Re: "Opportunity" by @cleothemuse #Stargate Ba'al/Qetesh fanfic (PG-13/Teens) cleothemuse May 21 2012, 20:44:50 UTC
Teehee! Yes, I definitely wanted to tie in some of Vala's toughness in adverse situations, why she was relatively cool with being impregnated against her will (again!), and why she and Baal--not just Baal and Qetesh--had some history. as "Insiders" seemed to imply.

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campylobacter May 22 2012, 04:01:01 UTC
This makes Vala's lies even more alarming: she downplays her past instead of exaggerating it. :U

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cleothemuse May 22 2012, 04:07:08 UTC
Exactly... give people a big enough lie to focus on and they won't believe the truth if it slaps them in the face.

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cleothemuse May 21 2012, 20:46:02 UTC
Thanks! ^_^ She's a gal who definitely deserves a backstory as varied and colorful as the lies she spins XD

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eilidh17 May 22 2012, 04:35:30 UTC
Yay! Love this! Excellent and very clever back story for our girl. The idea of them taking both children as hosts is rather chilling but totally realistic, given what we already know.

Excellent. More A-Z please :)

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cleothemuse May 22 2012, 04:39:43 UTC
And unfortunately very "normal" for the oft-incestuous "gods"... :(

*smish* ^_^

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obsessivemuch1 May 23 2012, 09:58:04 UTC
As for Baal, he alternately treated her as a favorite pet, a dangerous prisoner, or a beloved companion.

Perfection.

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