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Clever Mischief Chapter 11: Friendly Competition

Jan 16, 2006 00:32

Clever Mischief, Chapter 11: Friendly Competition
Date: Sunday, September 11, 2005
Location: Hogsmeade
Character: Fred, George
Rating: Any Age

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Comments 42

neespence January 16 2006, 14:50:47 UTC

"F-U-C...."

I had a smile on my face for the entire chapter. Wonderfully written!

rose_whispers January 16 2006, 15:11:47 UTC

Thanks so much!

star_faerie January 16 2006, 15:26:10 UTC

lol. I loved this chapter ^^ It's so sweet.

rose_whispers January 23 2006, 16:20:49 UTC

Thank you! It was fun to write :)

lilycat81 January 16 2006, 16:28:34 UTC

Poor Fred! I did like George's song, however, despite feeling sympathetic for out poor Fred. :D

I can't wait to see what pranks they come up with. How will Hermione take them, I wonder?

Wonderful writing! Very clever.

rose_whispers January 23 2006, 16:21:27 UTC

Thanks so much :D George isn't particularly sympathetic to Fred's plight, is he? ;)

rogueravenclaw January 16 2006, 16:54:21 UTC

hehehe. Interesting adaptation of that old school rhyme, lol. Loved this chapter! And Oliver Wood with a gay crush? Amusing to think about, particularly considering the only thing I can logically imagine him having a crush on is his broomstick. ...I meant an actually broomstick, not a "broomstick"... although that would be highly amusing as well. ;P

rose_whispers January 23 2006, 16:22:37 UTC

Thanks! You know, I bet that if you sifted through HP fic, you'd come across a story or thre about Oliver and his broomstick. It's just freakishly natural, isn't it? *giggles*

draconic_rogue January 16 2006, 18:46:00 UTC

This is my favorite chapter so far! You both write the twins so well and make them so adorably devious.

rose_whispers January 23 2006, 16:22:59 UTC

Thank you! We love making the twins do mischief ;)