The other thing to watch is just the spacing- it breaks up a little bit and it's hard to follow sometimes, so I would just do a check after you post it to make sure you have your text and words in the right spots.
Good chapter 1! I'm sad they had to meet this way (although I could see it coming) and I like how Jensen is comforting here already! ;)
It was originally longer, but i thought it was too rambly, it just means i've gotten a head start on chapte 2, which may or may not be up on Friday/Saturday.
I always have an issue with spacing on LJ it took me almost half an hour to do an LJ cut last night, i'll chech the post a little later todtay though! Thanks for point it out :)
I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter! I know, There's a lot about Jensen we don't know yet and a lot about Danneel, but hopefully i'll do the reveal justice! In the mean time i figured she could use a friend ;)
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I can't wait to read more- you can't stop there!
The other thing to watch is just the spacing- it breaks up a little bit and it's hard to follow sometimes, so I would just do a check after you post it to make sure you have your text and words in the right spots.
Good chapter 1! I'm sad they had to meet this way (although I could see it coming) and I like how Jensen is comforting here already! ;)
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It was originally longer, but i thought it was too rambly, it just means i've gotten a head start on chapte 2, which may or may not be up on Friday/Saturday.
I always have an issue with spacing on LJ it took me almost half an hour to do an LJ cut last night, i'll chech the post a little later todtay though! Thanks for point it out :)
I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter! I know, There's a lot about Jensen we don't know yet and a lot about Danneel, but hopefully i'll do the reveal justice! In the mean time i figured she could use a friend ;)
thanks again for your kinda reveiw!
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