ALIEN WINE (slightly revised)
by Atlanta Lea circa 1987
It had started out as a rather dull afternoon for the Brigadier, but that rare condition wasn’t destined to last. The arrival of ex-Captain Yates at UNIT HQ just happened to coincide with that of a racketing blue police box. As a matter of fact, the police box had the advantage of the Captain
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Fun story! Especially as Harry and Sarah were so well-drawn, just as I remember "my" TARDIS team.
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I posted a few other short and semi-short stories on LJ for rabidsamfan's delectation, all written back in the mid-80's when we were running the UHSFC. I've changed one other to public, called The Last Time I Saw Paris. If anyone's interested, I can change the settings on some of the others.
Do please let me know if you see any inaccurate Britishisms or inappropriate Americanisms? Always difficult to write in a second language, and now at a 30-year remove from the original slang.
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The only tiny "deviation" which is probably more due to my ignorance of how slang is used elsewhere in the country, is "“Thank heavens for small favours,” said the Brigadier. " We say "thank heaven for small mercies".
There is so much brilliance here - Sarah calling dinner "tea" is accurate, "a bit more of that" for the wine, everything Harry says (and the 1970s Who already used older idioms for Sarah, not like the 1960s "hip" companion dialogue)...
All really convincing. I love it.
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And there is the most wonderful line I've heard in 33 years of being a Who watcher...
“You’re not too old, Doctor! You’re in awfully good shape for seven-hundred-and-some. Could pass for forty at midnight on a dim planet.”
Wonderful!
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